OpiNelZ - After the Smoke Clears

OpiNelZ · 12-01-2010, 06:33 PM

Hi everyone, let's see my first concept

raulfabi · 12-01-2010, 06:37 PM

Opi, welcome.
Nice concept, but you should see the border between the city and the mountain, or you should not see that much of the city.
Just my opinion.
Cheers

Akim · 12-01-2010, 06:42 PM

You mean under water or frosen ? In all the cases looks fine, if u'll hard work on it

raulfabi · 12-01-2010, 07:06 PM

I mean the underwater part.
The deeper,the darker the water should be.

2BIG3k · 12-01-2010, 07:11 PM

I like the idea.
Be careful about lighting of the city, i guess the shadows would be a lot more diffuse, firstly because I assume it's frozen in a solid water mass (not just a frozen water surface) and secondly since the rest of your scene seems to have no harsh sunlight either.

Cheers,

Marc

Claw · 13-01-2010, 08:03 AM

I like your idea. Maybe you could have the tops of the very tallest buildings sticking out of the ice, just and idea. Nice work so far.

OpiNelZ · 13-01-2010, 11:26 AM

thank all for the comments, i will do my best to improve my image following your suggestion

next wip coming soon

yaRa · 13-01-2010, 12:17 PM

HI!
Nice and classic color mix!
like France flag )))

OpiNelZ · 13-01-2010, 10:12 PM

new wip

2BIG3k · 14-01-2010, 08:35 AM

Like the direction in which it's going. Love the rubbish bin like shaped robots or whatever it might be

raulfabi · 14-01-2010, 08:24 PM

That are benders from Futurama

Nice picture man.
Some small waves arround the statue could be usefull.
Cheers.

OpiNelZ · 29-01-2010, 09:21 PM

this is the end for me, i hope you like my final image

12-01-2010, 06:33 PM	#1
OpiNelZ Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Italy Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	OpiNelZ - After the Smoke Clears Hi everyone, let's see my first concept

12-01-2010, 06:37 PM	#2
raulfabi Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Timisoara/Romania Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Opi, welcome. Nice concept, but you should see the border between the city and the mountain, or you should not see that much of the city. Just my opinion. Cheers __________________ May the power of CG be withu you! www.raulfabi.webs.com

12-01-2010, 07:06 PM	#4
raulfabi Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Timisoara/Romania Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I mean the underwater part. The deeper,the darker the water should be. __________________ May the power of CG be withu you! www.raulfabi.webs.com

13-01-2010, 12:17 PM	#8
yaRa Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Russia Posts: 94 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	HI! Nice and classic color mix! like France flag ))) __________________ Don't be afraid of perfection – you can never reach it /Salvador Dali/

14-01-2010, 08:24 PM	#11
raulfabi Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Timisoara/Romania Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That are benders from Futurama Nice picture man. Some small waves arround the statue could be usefull. Cheers. __________________ May the power of CG be withu you! www.raulfabi.webs.com

12-01-2010, 06:42 PM	#3
Akim Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	You mean under water or frosen ? In all the cases looks fine, if u'll hard work on it

12-01-2010, 07:11 PM	#5
2BIG3k Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I like the idea. Be careful about lighting of the city, i guess the shadows would be a lot more diffuse, firstly because I assume it's frozen in a solid water mass (not just a frozen water surface) and secondly since the rest of your scene seems to have no harsh sunlight either. Cheers, Marc

13-01-2010, 08:03 AM	#6
Claw Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: UK Posts: 60 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like your idea. Maybe you could have the tops of the very tallest buildings sticking out of the ice, just and idea. Nice work so far.

13-01-2010, 11:26 AM	#7
OpiNelZ Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Italy Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thank all for the comments, i will do my best to improve my image following your suggestion next wip coming soon

13-01-2010, 10:12 PM	#9
OpiNelZ Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Italy Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	new wip

14-01-2010, 08:35 AM	#10
2BIG3k Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Like the direction in which it's going. Love the rubbish bin like shaped robots or whatever it might be

29-01-2010, 09:21 PM	#12
OpiNelZ Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Italy Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is the end for me, i hope you like my final image

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