Nissan Skyline GT-R34 Z-Tune WIP

beacon1 · 06-02-2010, 04:42 PM

Hi all, its been a long time since i posted here. Still thinking how i'm gonna detail the back part, mesh topology's messed up a bit. C&C's greatly appreciated, doing it in Maya 2010. I started this in 3dsmax but thought i redo it in maya. Based it mostly on gathered photos, blueprint not much help on details.

McFly · 06-02-2010, 05:48 PM

Clay renders would help to try and find pinching and stuff. There is this big triangle at the back and I would like to see it with a Turbosmooth (or whatever the Maya equivalent is) on it.

beacon1 · 06-02-2010, 07:24 PM

Here's a clay render, saw some things i need to fix.

beacon1 · 07-02-2010, 06:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by McFly

Clay renders would help to try and find pinching and stuff. There is this big triangle at the back and I would like to see it with a Turbosmooth (or whatever the Maya equivalent is) on it.

Thanks for the comment, yes there is, i think it smooth's out. Here's another clay render.

beacon1 · 07-02-2010, 03:19 PM

Made some changes, while browsing some ztune photo's, some detail errors on my part. c&c's most welcome, tnx.

beacon1 · 07-02-2010, 03:34 PM

here's another

chunkymunky · 08-02-2010, 10:29 AM

High poly tires tastic! Wow lol.

beacon1 · 08-02-2010, 11:33 AM

some updates...

Tuss4 · 08-02-2010, 08:51 PM

looks good!

Kage · 08-02-2010, 09:00 PM

The model itself looks fine at the moment, but the off-putting thing for me are the wheels.
It would be much better if you modeled the detail. I know it would take a lot longer, but the results would speak for themselves

beacon1 · 09-02-2010, 03:38 PM

Some more updates, almost done with the rear details, also remodeled the headlights. Saw some mistakes again need to fix..hehe.

@ Tuss4, chunky : thanks =)

@ Kage : thanks, yeah thats gonna take a while, saw someone post somthin like that here years ago, forgot how he did it, maybe gona spare time

beacon1 · 15-02-2010, 11:15 AM

Some test renders, car paint test...hope y'all like it

Lighting with 1 directional light, HDRI reflection.
Still practicing with mental ray. Models still WIP, continuously
tweaking some details and maybe model the interior.

C & C's greatly appreciated.

McFly · 15-02-2010, 12:30 PM

Looking good, nice model. Renders could be much better if you lowered the reflections and set the camera lower, closer to the ground.. If the camera is too high it makes cars look small.

beacon1 · 24-02-2010, 09:16 PM

Another test, studio render

@McFly: Thanks for the tips, yes i agree, lower reflection is better.

beacon1 · 02-03-2010, 07:23 AM

Here's another render, mental ray, fg with 1 spotlight, domelighting incandesence >1, crits are welcome, help me improve my renders, thanks

06-02-2010, 04:42 PM	#1
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Nissan Skyline GT-R34 Z-Tune WIP Hi all, its been a long time since i posted here. Still thinking how i'm gonna detail the back part, mesh topology's messed up a bit. C&C's greatly appreciated, doing it in Maya 2010. I started this in 3dsmax but thought i redo it in maya. Based it mostly on gathered photos, blueprint not much help on details. Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

06-02-2010, 05:48 PM	#2
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Lyon Posts: 3,181 Thanks: 8 Thanked 244 Times in 231 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Clay renders would help to try and find pinching and stuff. There is this big triangle at the back and I would like to see it with a Turbosmooth (or whatever the Maya equivalent is) on it. __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

06-02-2010, 07:24 PM	#3
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Here's a clay render, saw some things i need to fix. Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

07-02-2010, 03:19 PM	#5
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	update Made some changes, while browsing some ztune photo's, some detail errors on my part. c&c's most welcome, tnx. Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

07-02-2010, 03:34 PM	#6
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	here's another Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

08-02-2010, 10:29 AM	#7
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	High poly tires tastic! Wow lol.

08-02-2010, 11:33 AM	#8
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	s some updates... Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

08-02-2010, 08:51 PM	#9
Tuss4 UNCH UNH Yehhh.... Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 1,468 Thanks: 2 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	looks good! __________________ .:\|my take on Iron Man W. I. P.\|:. .:\|my Fairlady Z W. I. P.\|:. Check out my blog click on my sig!

08-02-2010, 09:00 PM	#10
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,684 Thanks: 45 Thanked 70 Times in 65 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	The model itself looks fine at the moment, but the off-putting thing for me are the wheels. It would be much better if you modeled the detail. I know it would take a lot longer, but the results would speak for themselves __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP

09-02-2010, 03:38 PM	#11
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Some more updates, almost done with the rear details, also remodeled the headlights. Saw some mistakes again need to fix..hehe. @ Tuss4, chunky : thanks =) @ Kage : thanks, yeah thats gonna take a while, saw someone post somthin like that here years ago, forgot how he did it, maybe gona spare time Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

15-02-2010, 11:15 AM	#12
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	test renders Some test renders, car paint test...hope y'all like it Lighting with 1 directional light, HDRI reflection. Still practicing with mental ray. Models still WIP, continuously tweaking some details and maybe model the interior. C & C's greatly appreciated. Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

15-02-2010, 12:30 PM	#13
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Lyon Posts: 3,181 Thanks: 8 Thanked 244 Times in 231 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Looking good, nice model. Renders could be much better if you lowered the reflections and set the camera lower, closer to the ground.. If the camera is too high it makes cars look small. __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

24-02-2010, 09:16 PM	#14
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Another test, studio render @McFly: Thanks for the tips, yes i agree, lower reflection is better. Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

02-03-2010, 07:23 AM	#15
beacon1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Here's another render, mental ray, fg with 1 spotlight, domelighting incandesence >1, crits are welcome, help me improve my renders, thanks Attached Images __________________ *** http://edfeg71.deviantart.com/

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