Joe Cyriac - Indiana Jones - Gorefang - Page 2

joecyriac · 23-04-2010, 06:49 PM

Martin_x, chunkymunky: Thank you!

Just a small update tonight. Finished the bakes, and fixed most of the errors I saw. Also lowered the polycount, he's at 9600 tris now. Starting with the texturing tomorrow, think a handpainted feel would be nice.

Crits are welcome.

SR_6274 · 23-04-2010, 08:02 PM

Very nice work so far. My only crit is with his abdomen area. You have great detail work in most of everything else, but it looks like you just put in a perfectly round belly button, then left the rest of the area with no detail.

Overall it looks great, and I really can't wait to see it textured.

chris_solo · 24-04-2010, 08:32 AM

Nice work! bakes is clean.
Does he not there an error in the neck? a sewing uv's? you put the AO?

Raul · 26-04-2010, 03:58 AM

Very creative! I think that u could have done more with the anatomy, the detailing is pretty nice tho. The only thing that really just kills it is...

horrible and very slopy seam of the subtools going through each other. You may wanna try using the sculpt tool between the two objects to soften that out until is looking natural and not so horrible.

You should also post some wires.

joecyriac · 26-04-2010, 07:55 PM

SR_6274: Glad you like it so far. I left the belly area blank so there'll be an area to rest, hope the textured version conveys that better.
chris_solo, Raul: Yep, I noticed that seam. I'll take it out back and shoot it in a bit

Here's the update. Hand painted textures, should be done with finetuning and some more props tomorrow. Then it's pedestal time.

LemonW · 27-04-2010, 01:31 PM

i think it could be more soft between different color, the gradient is a little hard, i am not sure if it is correct for my expression. i am sorry for my poor english.

chunkymunky · 27-04-2010, 02:35 PM

Interesting colouring, I thought you'd go down the typical greeny/grey route but it's refreshing to see a browny coloured skin. It's getting better and better with every update

joecyriac · 28-04-2010, 10:07 AM

Phew. That's done.

LemonW, chunkymunky: Thanks for the suggestions. Yeah took him down a slightly different route with the complexion, not the usual green. Hope you like the final.

Well here it is. Glad I could make it in time. This was a fun topic, I tried to make something a little different from your average treasure hunter. Also learnt a lot in terms of hand painting textures. Thank you for all the comments and crits. I haven't had much chance to look at the other threads, as I entered pretty late. Hope you enjoy the final character.

chunkymunky · 28-04-2010, 11:12 AM

Really nice entry, best of luck for the comp

BiG ToE-3DT · 28-04-2010, 02:16 PM

did you post this in the final entry thread yet?

Martin_x · 28-04-2010, 02:48 PM

Nice way of getting rid of that seam)
Great job! You got my vote)

joecyriac · 28-04-2010, 02:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Martin_x

Nice way to getting rid if that seam)
Great job! You got my vote)

Thank you! It was driving me nuts!

Quote:

Originally Posted by BiG ToE-3DT

did you post this in the final entry thread yet?

Yes sir.

Raul · 28-04-2010, 04:05 PM

so you chose to hide the seam, lol. nice!!! Good finish man!

The texures on your stand are not as sharp as the textures the character. Are they lower res or something?

hulahuga · 28-04-2010, 04:25 PM

Hiding is ace

.

This turned out really cool. I like the hand painted textures as well as concept and model

. All the details are also cool, a lot to go around in his equipment

.

joecyriac · 01-05-2010, 04:06 AM

hulahuga: Thank you!
Raul: Thanks! Yeah, the pedestal has a smaller res texture. That's why it's not as sharp.

23-04-2010, 06:49 PM	#16
joecyriac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update 03 Martin_x, chunkymunky: Thank you! Just a small update tonight. Finished the bakes, and fixed most of the errors I saw. Also lowered the polycount, he's at 9600 tris now. Starting with the texturing tomorrow, think a handpainted feel would be nice. Crits are welcome. __________________ My Art Blog

23-04-2010, 08:02 PM	#17
SR_6274 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando, FL Posts: 1,022 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Very nice work so far. My only crit is with his abdomen area. You have great detail work in most of everything else, but it looks like you just put in a perfectly round belly button, then left the rest of the area with no detail. Overall it looks great, and I really can't wait to see it textured. __________________ Speed Modeling Challenges Winner SMC #60 - Done in 60 Seconds Second Place SMC #52 - Take a closer look Honorable Mentions The New SMC's - 025 - Large Cappuccino with sugar My Web Site MY DWIV Thread

24-04-2010, 08:32 AM	#18
chris_solo looking for job... Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: France Posts: 1,369 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Nice work! bakes is clean. Does he not there an error in the neck? a sewing uv's? you put the AO? __________________ always try to do better than last time! (sorry for my poor english!) ---> DW V - Deus ex machina Lightwave User Blender User

26-04-2010, 03:58 AM	#19
Raul Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 976 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Very creative! I think that u could have done more with the anatomy, the detailing is pretty nice tho. The only thing that really just kills it is... horrible and very slopy seam of the subtools going through each other. You may wanna try using the sculpt tool between the two objects to soften that out until is looking natural and not so horrible. You should also post some wires. __________________ folio \|\| my game art thread

26-04-2010, 07:55 PM	#20
joecyriac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	SR_6274: Glad you like it so far. I left the belly area blank so there'll be an area to rest, hope the textured version conveys that better. chris_solo, Raul: Yep, I noticed that seam. I'll take it out back and shoot it in a bit Here's the update. Hand painted textures, should be done with finetuning and some more props tomorrow. Then it's pedestal time. __________________ My Art Blog

27-04-2010, 01:31 PM	#21
LemonW Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 152 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	i think it could be more soft between different color, the gradient is a little hard, i am not sure if it is correct for my expression. i am sorry for my poor english.

27-04-2010, 02:35 PM	#22
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Interesting colouring, I thought you'd go down the typical greeny/grey route but it's refreshing to see a browny coloured skin. It's getting better and better with every update

28-04-2010, 10:07 AM	#23
joecyriac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Phew. That's done. LemonW, chunkymunky: Thanks for the suggestions. Yeah took him down a slightly different route with the complexion, not the usual green. Hope you like the final. Well here it is. Glad I could make it in time. This was a fun topic, I tried to make something a little different from your average treasure hunter. Also learnt a lot in terms of hand painting textures. Thank you for all the comments and crits. I haven't had much chance to look at the other threads, as I entered pretty late. Hope you enjoy the final character. __________________ My Art Blog

28-04-2010, 11:12 AM	#24
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Really nice entry, best of luck for the comp

28-04-2010, 02:16 PM	#25
BiG ToE-3DT Reputation beyond repute Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Chicago Posts: 8,601 Thanks: 135 Thanked 143 Times in 115 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	did you post this in the final entry thread yet? __________________ Thighten Up The Graphics On Level 3 "something wrongI think" Threedy 4 Life I hate Justin Bieber every day

28-04-2010, 02:48 PM	#26
Martin_x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens, NY Posts: 296 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Nice way of getting rid of that seam) Great job! You got my vote) Last edited by Martin_x; 28-04-2010 at 03:07 PM..

28-04-2010, 04:05 PM	#28
Raul Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 976 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	so you chose to hide the seam, lol. nice!!! Good finish man! The texures on your stand are not as sharp as the textures the character. Are they lower res or something? __________________ folio \|\| my game art thread

28-04-2010, 04:25 PM	#29
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Hiding is ace . This turned out really cool. I like the hand painted textures as well as concept and model . All the details are also cool, a lot to go around in his equipment . __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

01-05-2010, 04:06 AM	#30
joecyriac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hulahuga: Thank you! Raul: Thanks! Yeah, the pedestal has a smaller res texture. That's why it's not as sharp. __________________ My Art Blog Last edited by joecyriac; 01-05-2010 at 04:06 AM.. Reason: Spelling Error

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