|30-05-2010, 10:51 AM||#11|
loving...... Kerem Beyit
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smthng with more action and interactions will be fit for the graphic novel.
heres what washka ordered( umm but shouln't the doc order?)
thanks washka. glad you liked it .
about the two warriors training , that will be like goku and vegeta training in hyperbolic time chamber , hmm but its a great idea none the less.
who will break the spell from outside? me? aaw gosh u made me blush.
well ill continue with the first revelation :
on that night i sneaked out of the acdemy , i had stuck coconut hair on myself to disgiuse as a wild beaver or smthng.
it was hard to sneak past AV sensei but i manged it, he was the main reason why didnot teleport, he can tell who went , where ,why,and when, all by looking at the magic residue.sheesh !! why teachers have to be geniuses.
i did not fly i just walked like a beaver , when iwas safely away from haven's perimeter, i hoped a lil.i could not take to the sky as the watchtowers may see me.
i reached the marsh after 3 hours,there in the centre , it appeared the black thing spread all over was actually covering a crater in the centre.
the terrain was kinda resculpted the area other than black was scorched red , u dnt see all this from the sky.
i had seen the picture of then green valley, in AV sensei's book , this sight was heart aching.
the gases started tickling my nose and i sneezed , i was scared that some unknown horror may track me now.
the black began thumping , and so did my heart , i was sweating like hell , the black called out whos there, i rattled , can you free me,it said?
i gathered courage but still squeaked , what if ur the ultimate doom ? what if u make me black too , i am very scared , please stop thumping.
oh sorry , dont worry iam good , tell me whats the sight outsde i will tell you how to take me out.
but who are you ? why ar u here ? why cant you get out? and who prisoned u here?
I am freespace. someone imprisoned me here , idont know his motive but i think he trying to kill me.
Ffffrrre..... freespace? the god of time and space? omg are u serious?
yes. indeed. how do you know me kid? iam way old then ur time.
AV sensei taught me about you. u were in the battle with 7 hearts, in which we lost are founders.
Your founders arent dead , they are captive , the enemy plans to use them to create the weapon to kill me , he wants to rule time.
wish i knew who it was.
who is av sensei?
hes the archmage elven prince Avatar.
oh well i hope that avatars student will not dissapoint , break the magic from outside son.
umm the greeanvalley is scorched red , mountains are cracked, and this black soot is rock hard . what should i do.
about a lil faraway to northeast theres an ancient leprechaun establishment , find diamonds or an even harder stuff and start breaking the black.
wont any magic do good ? i asked.
umm not largely , but u can try. well i think ill go find diamonds.
i will return shortly.
after an hour or so i returned with lots of diamonds and strange metals.
he guided me to use few spells and make tools out of them , after hours of hardwork,
i had made a diamondhead hammer.
i started whacking it, i used superspeed spell to finish it of quickly. but it still took 80 minutes.
a mauve flower of energy rose out of the crater, and from it revealed itself , a shiny black being, whose body showed the universe.
sure it was god of time and space , freespace.
he looke around and was saddened by the sight of green valley, what usay we reinstate green valley young dragon.
after u sir, what can i do?
do u have rejuvination spell.
ya its 30% efficient.
fine use it ill make it 300% efficient.
we combined are spells and the magic began restoring the ever beatiful green valley.
what will i say when i return back? iaam worried. dont worry. u wont be in trouble.
he opened up a vision portal and every one was busy prepairing for some long travel, with dean sage.
they havent noticed yet, wanna stay with me for a while?
ooo sure , can u teach me basics of being time dragon
ur half dragon , it may be very risky , please i wanna try iam a mage too.
ok we will stop by time dragons academy. but only a walkthru ok?
excellent. can we eat something first?
sure. the green valley was restored , and we flew far northeast to farmlands and had a feasty meal.
farm owner was astonished to see a veg dragon , i digged in on pumkins and water melons.
freespace ate apples and almonds.
meanwhile back at academy , before leaving for the urgent assignment AV waved and twitched his fngers and cast a spell , 2 brightlights wildly began searching the area.
and AV sat in the carriage.
more after lunch
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