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loving...... Kerem Beyit
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smthng with more action and interactions will be fit for the graphic novel.
heres what washka ordered( umm but shouln't the doc order?) ![]() thanks washka. glad you liked it . about the two warriors training , that will be like goku and vegeta training in hyperbolic time chamber , hmm but its a great idea none the less. who will break the spell from outside? me? aaw gosh u made me blush. ![]() well ill continue with the first revelation : on that night i sneaked out of the acdemy , i had stuck coconut hair on myself to disgiuse as a wild beaver or smthng. it was hard to sneak past AV sensei but i manged it, he was the main reason why didnot teleport, he can tell who went , where ,why,and when, all by looking at the magic residue.sheesh !! why teachers have to be geniuses. i did not fly i just walked like a beaver , when iwas safely away from haven's perimeter, i hoped a lil.i could not take to the sky as the watchtowers may see me. i reached the marsh after 3 hours,there in the centre , it appeared the black thing spread all over was actually covering a crater in the centre. the terrain was kinda resculpted the area other than black was scorched red , u dnt see all this from the sky. i had seen the picture of then green valley, in AV sensei's book , this sight was heart aching. the gases started tickling my nose and i sneezed , i was scared that some unknown horror may track me now. the black began thumping , and so did my heart , i was sweating like hell , the black called out whos there, i rattled , can you free me,it said? i gathered courage but still squeaked , what if ur the ultimate doom ? what if u make me black too , i am very scared , please stop thumping. oh sorry , dont worry iam good , tell me whats the sight outsde i will tell you how to take me out. but who are you ? why ar u here ? why cant you get out? and who prisoned u here? I am freespace. someone imprisoned me here , idont know his motive but i think he trying to kill me. Ffffrrre..... freespace? the god of time and space? omg are u serious? yes. indeed. how do you know me kid? iam way old then ur time. AV sensei taught me about you. u were in the battle with 7 hearts, in which we lost are founders. Your founders arent dead , they are captive , the enemy plans to use them to create the weapon to kill me , he wants to rule time. wish i knew who it was. who is av sensei? hes the archmage elven prince Avatar. oh well i hope that avatars student will not dissapoint , break the magic from outside son. umm the greeanvalley is scorched red , mountains are cracked, and this black soot is rock hard . what should i do. about a lil faraway to northeast theres an ancient leprechaun establishment , find diamonds or an even harder stuff and start breaking the black. wont any magic do good ? i asked. umm not largely , but u can try. well i think ill go find diamonds. i will return shortly. after an hour or so i returned with lots of diamonds and strange metals. he guided me to use few spells and make tools out of them , after hours of hardwork, i had made a diamondhead hammer. i started whacking it, i used superspeed spell to finish it of quickly. but it still took 80 minutes. a mauve flower of energy rose out of the crater, and from it revealed itself , a shiny black being, whose body showed the universe. sure it was god of time and space , freespace. he looke around and was saddened by the sight of green valley, what usay we reinstate green valley young dragon. after u sir, what can i do? do u have rejuvination spell. ya its 30% efficient. fine use it ill make it 300% efficient. we combined are spells and the magic began restoring the ever beatiful green valley. what will i say when i return back? iaam worried. dont worry. u wont be in trouble. he opened up a vision portal and every one was busy prepairing for some long travel, with dean sage. they havent noticed yet, wanna stay with me for a while? ooo sure , can u teach me basics of being time dragon ur half dragon , it may be very risky , please i wanna try iam a mage too. ok we will stop by time dragons academy. but only a walkthru ok? excellent. can we eat something first? sure. the green valley was restored , and we flew far northeast to farmlands and had a feasty meal. farm owner was astonished to see a veg dragon , i digged in on pumkins and water melons. freespace ate apples and almonds. meanwhile back at academy , before leaving for the urgent assignment AV waved and twitched his fngers and cast a spell , 2 brightlights wildly began searching the area. and AV sat in the carriage. ********** more after lunch ![]() |
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