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Old 11-04-2012, 08:05 AM   #1
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Enjoy the show 3D animation

Hello,

my new animation is ready! "enjoy the show"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Agk4NX1VWd4

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Old 11-04-2012, 08:45 AM   #2
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I love the camera work in this shot, you have some nice camera angles and some nice cuts.
The animation could do with a bit more work because the character pops from one pose to the next.
Another thing that i noticed around the 20 second his screen right arm is lost behind the hand and the action feels really floaty.

This shot has lots of promise so keep working on it.
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