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Old 29-04-2012, 07:37 AM   #1
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Hi everyone!!! This is the last my work I did for test an amazing render in Keyshot. The design created by me, inspired by Monster-Ducati.
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Old 29-04-2012, 08:05 AM   #2
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design looks cool, probably better suited to be a cartoon bike due to the chains and exhausts that do remind of something seen in cartoon.

but it's really hard to look at the picture, trying to find the none blurred part or the part of a chrome that's clear - looks like one channel got nudged to the side ...

Can you post render without the post production?
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Old 29-04-2012, 08:19 AM   #3
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my humble opinion blurring the background would be just fine, the bike is much better without the effects you did in post - clear to the point and it shines
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Old 29-04-2012, 08:35 AM   #4
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Here is one more render with HDR.
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Old 30-04-2012, 05:55 AM   #5
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nice.. i think that the specularity or the highlight part is bit grainy
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Old 30-04-2012, 06:07 AM   #6
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Here is some more renders without hdr.
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Old 02-05-2012, 08:39 PM   #7
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And some screenshots from Keyshot.
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Old 04-05-2012, 01:06 PM   #8
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i like it, not 100% keen on the 6 exhausts though. And the scratches on the separate exhausts are all too similar which i think you should change.
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Old 07-05-2012, 03:22 PM   #9
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Thanks for comments. I could change some details but they don't effect on the full image. Here is the highpoly model rendered in Keyshot. Hope you like it!!!
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