Battlefly

goth · 15-11-2003, 07:00 PM

So, it's my first experience in work like this.

This world of an organic metall (with "differentwehave" time grid )
and alive rock. The world with four suns the world where live mine Battlefly... In second after you see ,Flower will catch Battlefly by its outer petals(with a blades on the edges) and eat she...

Sorry of mine english if in some cases it wasn't right

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3ds max 5 scanline mesh modeling

crit me!!!

goth · 16-11-2003, 03:47 AM

Hay guys, I waiting for you comments ...
is the work so "nothing" that you have no comments???

X_Dror · 16-11-2003, 04:30 AM

the model is very good but the butterfly need anothrer texture and change the background it makes some objects not so atractive.

btw: i really like the idea, very original.

novoAlias · 16-11-2003, 08:42 AM

heya
yea good work but maybe change the background and the pink texture on the flower looks like plastic at the moment, change them to a nice complicated texture and make the scene sophisticated

p0lym0rph · 16-11-2003, 11:02 AM

verry nice work,but the color are little flashy in the background

Drow · 16-11-2003, 03:43 PM

think the trea should look more like metal than plastic

but very good work and change this damn background to a blue

goth · 16-11-2003, 05:16 PM

...and change this damn background to a blue...
It MUST BE damn

coz its a very agressive world...
thanks guys for crit I'll consider it all )))

DMSR · 16-11-2003, 06:38 PM

great work, i like the idea! 4 suns must make great sunsets!

i agree with Drow, the tree should look more like metal.

i think the background is correct. maybe the ground at the bottom could be a bit darker.

Drow, i don't see why the background should be blue, it's another world not ours! if i draw a scene that is on mars, will you tell me to make the sky blue?

Daniel · 17-11-2003, 04:06 AM

I really like the model, but I dislike the color scheme.

Tr-Anssi · 17-11-2003, 08:38 AM

Nice concept and model, but I think the wings look too thick and heavy.. And the stinger doesn't show up very well, could be the angle.

Nice one.

Drow · 17-11-2003, 01:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by goth
...and change this damn background to a blue...
It MUST BE damn coz its a very agressive world...
thanks guys for crit I'll consider it all )))

I like blue and silver/metal but not red and silver/metal

red stoles the butterfly or battlefly the show

sry bad english ;(

Papaya · 17-11-2003, 05:23 PM

GREAT concept!! I personally think the wings are fantastic, especially the bevel at the edges.

goth · 17-11-2003, 05:42 PM

to Drow:

blue & silver metal ... yeah its good...

at first it was blue

BUT it doesn't look as AGRESSIVE as it must be...

night variations WILL BE with THE SPIDER from the same world, later (now I have too much work to done)

goth · 17-11-2003, 05:54 PM

"...I personally think the wings are fantastic, especially the bevel at the edges... "
Its a blades

on the wing's edges

that WINGS was the origin of all:the BattleFly and her world ,and a lot of others personages I have in head (and going to make as soon as possible)

thanks

:mad:

15-11-2003, 07:00 PM	#1
goth Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kazakhstan Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Battlefly So, it's my first experience in work like this. This world of an organic metall (with "differentwehave" time grid ) and alive rock. The world with four suns the world where live mine Battlefly... In second after you see ,Flower will catch Battlefly by its outer petals(with a blades on the edges) and eat she... Sorry of mine english if in some cases it wasn't right) 3ds max 5 scanline mesh modeling crit me!!! Attached Images

16-11-2003, 08:42 AM	#4
novoAlias Found snow. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Everywhere. Posts: 3,675 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	heya yea good work but maybe change the background and the pink texture on the flower looks like plastic at the moment, change them to a nice complicated texture and make the scene sophisticated __________________ ¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤ •°o.O[There's too much blood in my caffeine system]O.o°• •°o.O[Home]O.o°• ¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

16-11-2003, 06:38 PM	#8
DMSR Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: quebec Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	great work, i like the idea! 4 suns must make great sunsets! i agree with Drow, the tree should look more like metal. i think the background is correct. maybe the ground at the bottom could be a bit darker. Drow, i don't see why the background should be blue, it's another world not ours! if i draw a scene that is on mars, will you tell me to make the sky blue? __________________ Raph

17-11-2003, 04:06 AM	#9
Daniel Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Montreal Posts: 2,153 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I really like the model, but I dislike the color scheme. __________________ "There are no binding oaths between men and lions- wolves and lambs can enjoy no meeting of the minds- they are all bent on hating each other to the death." -Achilles "It is better by noble boldness to run the risk of being subject to half the evils we anticipate than to remain in cowardly listlessness for fear of what might happen." -Herodotus

17-11-2003, 08:38 AM	#10
Tr-Anssi Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Finland, Europe Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice concept and model, but I think the wings look too thick and heavy.. And the stinger doesn't show up very well, could be the angle. Nice one. __________________ .:Tr-Anssi:.

16-11-2003, 03:47 AM	#2
goth Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kazakhstan Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hay guys, I waiting for you comments ... is the work so "nothing" that you have no comments???

16-11-2003, 04:30 AM	#3
X_Dror Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Israel Posts: 189 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the model is very good but the butterfly need anothrer texture and change the background it makes some objects not so atractive. btw: i really like the idea, very original.

16-11-2003, 11:02 AM	#5
p0lym0rph Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: france Posts: 43 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	verry nice work,but the color are little flashy in the background

16-11-2003, 03:43 PM	#6
Drow Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 14 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	think the trea should look more like metal than plastic but very good work and change this damn background to a blue

16-11-2003, 05:16 PM	#7
goth Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kazakhstan Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	...and change this damn background to a blue... It MUST BE damn coz its a very agressive world... thanks guys for crit I'll consider it all )))

17-11-2003, 05:23 PM	#12
Papaya Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Hong Kong by way of LA Posts: 155 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	GREAT concept!! I personally think the wings are fantastic, especially the bevel at the edges.

17-11-2003, 05:42 PM	#13
goth Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kazakhstan Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	to Drow: blue & silver metal ... yeah its good... at first it was blue BUT it doesn't look as AGRESSIVE as it must be... night variations WILL BE with THE SPIDER from the same world, later (now I have too much work to done)

17-11-2003, 05:54 PM	#14
goth Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Kazakhstan Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	"...I personally think the wings are fantastic, especially the bevel at the edges... " Its a blades on the wing's edges that WINGS was the origin of all:the BattleFly and her world ,and a lot of others personages I have in head (and going to make as soon as possible) thanks :mad:

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