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Old 14-05-2012, 09:21 PM   #1
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Death Machine

This took about 2 weeks off and on to complete. I did previs in zbrush, sculpted and rigged the hi-res model in 3Ds Max and textured in PS.

Comments and crits welcome.



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Old 14-05-2012, 09:42 PM   #2
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Design looks cool but the textures need a lot of work.
They seem to be weathered in illogical places.
There'd be a greater concentration of scrapes and scratches at the edges and bits most exposed to the elements. Also near bits that are in direct contact with other moving parts.

The way youve got it now makes the design kind of hard to read.

Could you maybe post some clay renders so we can get a better idea of the model.
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Old 17-05-2012, 06:21 PM   #3
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Thanks for the crits, Krallis. I reworked the texture to make it more readable. Will post clay renders as soon as I've rendered them out.

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