Ello's Sketchbook

[Ello_Eiskind]

Hi there,

I'm Ello, and im new to 3DTotal. A friend of me recommended this forum to me, so i decided to join this community to get some advice. Im pretty new to 3D at all. I just started modeling with ZBrush 4 and know a little about maya.
I try to post as much useful stuff as i can, and especially in this Sketchbook i try to post as many practise work as i can.
My favourite hobby is drawing, so i try to realize some of my concepts from my pencil sketchbook in 3D.
I would really appreciate it if i get a lot of criticism and advices/hints what to do better and which tools to use. I only know and use a few tools in ZBrush atm.
I'll upload some pictures of my first works after this text here. They are practises about masses in the body. My friend told me, thats the best basic to start with.
I would really be happy, if i get some useful comments, about how doing better.

Thanks about any help, yours
Ello

[Ello_Eiskind]

here are my first practises.

thanks for comments and criticism.

thanks, Ello

[Ello_Eiskind]

here is one more practise, finished today.

thanks for replys
Ello

[Ello_Eiskind]

Here's a new practise. This time, i tried a challangeing pose. I also tried to improve the position of the muscles.

Thanks for comments.
Ello

[Ello_Eiskind]

Hi again. Long time no see.
I decided to upload something again and i could need some help.
I modeled a face with some help, a tutorial, but i think something with the face is not quite correct. It's the skullpart at the eyes. Could you please help me out and tell me what it is?
I upload some images, especially from the frona and the three quarter it looks kinda bulky.
But i dont know what to change.

Thanks in advance