Our House

jester · 13-09-2003, 07:42 AM

My first non-surrealistic non-bryce scene...
made with Blender3d 2.28a on a iMac G4 1GHz...
still lot of work to do...
need advice...

ronrn · 13-09-2003, 03:37 PM

Nice job so far. The proportions are a little off. The door height should be about the same as the top of the window. Maybe a more "stoney" mat on the window and door framework. Lighting looks good.

Modeled in Blender eh. I couldn't get past adding primatives in that program. A tough interface to work with, for me anyways. Keep up the good work.

Gerbilho · 14-09-2003, 10:06 AM

The stone around the door has very sharp edges, you have to smooth them

jester · 16-09-2003, 08:31 AM

I made a few changes...
later today I'll post the next release...

I resized the door and smoothed the frames (door and window)...
I changed a few more things...
but you'll see later...

THANKS!

jester · 20-09-2003, 08:44 AM

Here we go!
release 5.0!

Gerbilho · 20-09-2003, 09:35 AM

The stone on both sides of the door seems to be broken in half....fix it. Usually its just on stone from up to bottom, otherwise the connection between them is more subtle. I dont know italy very well, only been there once...but I've never seen a door opening to the street side!!!

jester · 20-09-2003, 03:13 PM

I tried once with the single piece columns for the door frame... it looked really unreal... I'll try reduceing the distance between them...

I like the door to open to the street, it's just that I like it that way, also because I'm not reproducing some real building anywhere in the world...

Thanks!!

jester · 22-09-2003, 07:07 AM

new version later...
yesterday I was angry... so I broke the vase...
I even canged it's texture...
made some correction to the wall...
fixed some trouble with the street tiles...
changed the way I applied the texture to the ladder...
fixed some trouble with the window frame..
and this time no color correction...
see you later...

jester · 23-09-2003, 04:36 PM

I wish someone will criticize more, 'cause I think self posting is some kind of masturbation...

here we go!

Our House 6.0

wanna see an "alternative" version?

Wire House

see ya

ronrn · 24-09-2003, 12:28 AM

The lighting looks pretty good. The brick wall texture looks very good. I think the texture of the stone around the door could use some improvement. Coming along nicely.

Keep up the good work.

jester · 14-10-2003, 11:27 AM

If I'll solve a different problem... later you have more of this to crit!

be back soon...

Chris-3DT · 14-10-2003, 03:43 PM

dunno if anyone said that allready but that ladder looks far too small.

jester · 05-11-2003, 08:03 AM

Last Version

here we go...

unfinished work, but I think I won't work on it in the next months...

maybe one day I'll fix its problems...

jester · 27-04-2004, 12:57 AM

made some change to camera position, lights and bumps...

Morwen · 27-04-2004, 03:06 AM

Good modeling, i like it (only one thing is strange : see pic). For good textures (& free) go here : http://perso.club-internet.fr/lemog/

Continue please & good luck

13-09-2003, 07:42 AM	#1
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Newbie - Our House My first non-surrealistic non-bryce scene... made with Blender3d 2.28a on a iMac G4 1GHz... still lot of work to do... need advice... __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings Last edited by jester; 15-09-2003 at 08:00 AM..

16-09-2003, 08:31 AM	#4
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I made a few changes... later today I'll post the next release... I resized the door and smoothed the frames (door and window)... I changed a few more things... but you'll see later... THANKS! __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

20-09-2003, 08:44 AM	#5
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Here we go! release 5.0! __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

20-09-2003, 03:13 PM	#7
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I tried once with the single piece columns for the door frame... it looked really unreal... I'll try reduceing the distance between them... I like the door to open to the street, it's just that I like it that way, also because I'm not reproducing some real building anywhere in the world... Thanks!! __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

22-09-2003, 07:07 AM	#8
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	new version later... yesterday I was angry... so I broke the vase... I even canged it's texture... made some correction to the wall... fixed some trouble with the street tiles... changed the way I applied the texture to the ladder... fixed some trouble with the window frame.. and this time no color correction... see you later... __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

13-09-2003, 03:37 PM	#2
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice job so far. The proportions are a little off. The door height should be about the same as the top of the window. Maybe a more "stoney" mat on the window and door framework. Lighting looks good. Modeled in Blender eh. I couldn't get past adding primatives in that program. A tough interface to work with, for me anyways. Keep up the good work.

14-09-2003, 10:06 AM	#3
Gerbilho Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Portugal Posts: 176 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The stone around the door has very sharp edges, you have to smooth them

20-09-2003, 09:35 AM	#6
Gerbilho Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Portugal Posts: 176 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The stone on both sides of the door seems to be broken in half....fix it. Usually its just on stone from up to bottom, otherwise the connection between them is more subtle. I dont know italy very well, only been there once...but I've never seen a door opening to the street side!!!

23-09-2003, 04:36 PM	#9
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I wish someone will criticize more, 'cause I think self posting is some kind of masturbation... here we go! Our House 6.0 wanna see an "alternative" version? Wire House see ya __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

24-09-2003, 12:28 AM	#10
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The lighting looks pretty good. The brick wall texture looks very good. I think the texture of the stone around the door could use some improvement. Coming along nicely. Keep up the good work.

14-10-2003, 11:27 AM	#11
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	If I'll solve a different problem... later you have more of this to crit! be back soon... __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

14-10-2003, 03:43 PM	#12
Chris-3DT Threedy Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 2,361 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	dunno if anyone said that allready but that ladder looks far too small. __________________ [b]Christian

05-11-2003, 08:03 AM	#13
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Last Version here we go... unfinished work, but I think I won't work on it in the next months... maybe one day I'll fix its problems... __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

27-04-2004, 12:57 AM	#14
jester Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sanremo - Italy Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	made some change to camera position, lights and bumps... __________________ Giacomo, King of Jesters and Jester of Kings

27-04-2004, 03:06 AM	#15
Morwen Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Montpellier, France Posts: 105 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good modeling, i like it (only one thing is strange : see pic). For good textures (& free) go here : http://perso.club-internet.fr/lemog/ Continue please & good luck __________________ "There is no death, there is the Force." - a green dwarf - ------------------------- www.arkeo3d.com

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