Portrait of an invisible man

jeroentje · 13-09-2003, 03:41 PM

So what do you think?

Cheers, Jeroentje

sarN · 13-09-2003, 07:00 PM

haha very nice and original idea

Goj · 13-09-2003, 10:48 PM

Nice one. I really like it. Looks great too. Go idea with the cigarette.

jeroentje · 15-09-2003, 08:00 PM

Update

Thanks for all the nice replies everyone

Changed the lighting on his left shoulder.
Added a shadow of the cigarette on his right shoulder.
Changed the smoke going upwards from the cig.
Added the shape of the inside of his mouth (smoke going over the tongue, behind the teeth, little smoke upwards to the nose, to the back of his throat and down to the lungs, lungs split at the hight of the chest, but that's outside the frame and behind his shirt :P )

Cheers, Jeroentje

RBL · 15-09-2003, 08:48 PM

Hmm

I preffer the older one.

Jared · 15-09-2003, 09:20 PM

yeah, the first one had much cooler smoke.
Maybe you could do something in between?
You know, not to sharp smoke, but not too fuzzy either.

RBL · 16-09-2003, 01:06 PM

I preffer the smoke and the sharper and warmer light from the 1st. Fut i funny to see how the smoke fills the nostrils too. You saw LXG

jeroentje · 16-09-2003, 02:17 PM

@RBL
would you believe me if I said I hadn't heard from LXG after I started this piece?

RBL · 17-09-2003, 04:46 PM

Hollow man?

jeroentje · 17-09-2003, 06:10 PM

Chevy Chase (

)in I believe "The invisible man"....

RBL · 18-09-2003, 05:10 PM

Don´t take me wrong. It doesn´t make it to lose worth.
good jod. I asked that reference cuz the inspiration or motivation to do an invisible man.

jeroentje · 19-09-2003, 06:28 PM

Not taken you wrong in any way

btw, had a painting of Magritte in the back of my head also

Ferry P · 20-09-2003, 10:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by sarN
haha very nice and original idea

Sorry...but I don't think this is so original...
Never the less....it is a good painting job.

13-09-2003, 03:41 PM	#1
jeroentje Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Portrait of an invisible man So what do you think? Cheers, Jeroentje __________________ To the Masseraaahhtiii... Portfolio.

13-09-2003, 10:48 PM	#3
Goj Notta Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: New Orleans, LA Posts: 306 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice one. I really like it. Looks great too. Go idea with the cigarette. __________________ Have I returned? No, not really.

15-09-2003, 08:00 PM	#4
jeroentje Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update Thanks for all the nice replies everyone Changed the lighting on his left shoulder. Added a shadow of the cigarette on his right shoulder. Changed the smoke going upwards from the cig. Added the shape of the inside of his mouth (smoke going over the tongue, behind the teeth, little smoke upwards to the nose, to the back of his throat and down to the lungs, lungs split at the hight of the chest, but that's outside the frame and behind his shirt :P ) Cheers, Jeroentje __________________ To the Masseraaahhtiii... Portfolio.

15-09-2003, 08:48 PM	#5
RBL Taking things seriously. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Asturias!!! Posts: 468 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Hmm I preffer the older one. __________________ Do not start anything you aren´t going to finish. --->RBL.es<--- DW IV entry: 3D - Demon Prince - "Paradox"

15-09-2003, 09:20 PM	#6
Jared Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 170 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah, the first one had much cooler smoke. Maybe you could do something in between? You know, not to sharp smoke, but not too fuzzy either. __________________ "Say what?"

13-09-2003, 07:00 PM	#2
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	haha very nice and original idea

16-09-2003, 01:06 PM	#7
RBL Taking things seriously. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Asturias!!! Posts: 468 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	I preffer the smoke and the sharper and warmer light from the 1st. Fut i funny to see how the smoke fills the nostrils too. You saw LXG __________________ Do not start anything you aren´t going to finish. --->RBL.es<--- DW IV entry: 3D - Demon Prince - "Paradox"

16-09-2003, 02:17 PM	#8
jeroentje Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	@RBL would you believe me if I said I hadn't heard from LXG after I started this piece? __________________ To the Masseraaahhtiii... Portfolio.

17-09-2003, 04:46 PM	#9
RBL Taking things seriously. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Asturias!!! Posts: 468 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Hollow man? __________________ Do not start anything you aren´t going to finish. --->RBL.es<--- DW IV entry: 3D - Demon Prince - "Paradox"

17-09-2003, 06:10 PM	#10
jeroentje Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Chevy Chase ( )in I believe "The invisible man".... __________________ To the Masseraaahhtiii... Portfolio.

18-09-2003, 05:10 PM	#11
RBL Taking things seriously. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Asturias!!! Posts: 468 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Don´t take me wrong. It doesn´t make it to lose worth. good jod. I asked that reference cuz the inspiration or motivation to do an invisible man. __________________ Do not start anything you aren´t going to finish. --->RBL.es<--- DW IV entry: 3D - Demon Prince - "Paradox"

19-09-2003, 06:28 PM	#12
jeroentje Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Not taken you wrong in any way btw, had a painting of Magritte in the back of my head also __________________ To the Masseraaahhtiii... Portfolio.

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