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Old 31-01-2012, 07:59 AM   #1
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Sara

Hello everyone, I am nabil, and i want to share my still unfinished work with u guys, comments would be most appreciated, Cheers!!!

i have some problems in hair and eye reflection, my render was done in v-ray and i need a lot of help

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Old 31-01-2012, 04:35 PM   #2
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not bad, but it akward to have a close up when she doesn't even have a expression
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Old 31-01-2012, 06:44 PM   #3
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The face looks really long, definitely post a new image with some form of expression on her face and maybe not so big. Her hair is too perfect but everything else seems pretty good, not sure if the textures are holding up at that resolution they look a little pixelated.
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thx you McKronic and thank you lebaje for ur comments, yeah u're right, i'll try to fix that soonly.any other comments would be more helpful
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hi guys i decided to make the girl in the cloudy stat withe some cloth and i modified the sheep of the head too
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