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Old 07-02-2012, 06:50 PM   #1
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Smile new Music Video created in Blender

3071 - Fan Out (link on youtube)
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Old 09-02-2012, 07:49 AM   #2
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Interesting stuff, some constructives comments:

-There's some nice camera moves with the music but sometimes there is a lack of coherence between those, try to work tempo and rythm of the song with camera moves, or with animation of the elements in, even more.

-Track is long, maybe you could try to animate a shorter one but with a better quality?

-I bet rendering has been taking lot's of time but you could try to get a "cleaner" one, cartoon/shading could fit.

-You could try to use some more loops in the animation itself but with a constructive repetition, so we can feel a gradient in it. But I'm not 100
% sure the music fit for that.

-Asteroid part is interesting but a bit too dark imo, we can't see a lot.
Use more lighting, more spots...glow...

-You could also play with copy/paste animated elements a bit more, around the soundbox totem.

-You've got a lot of camera move around the "totem", somes fit, but the repetition around it is a bit boring.
I can guess it's center element of the animation, but maybe you could try to find some more focus around it.

-About animated 3D graphic element, you could also try to play with rounds figures, larges lines passing by, or trains going around (repetitive motives following each others).

-You could also try to "tell a story" in, I think there's a start, but it's still too abstract.

Keep it up, get the beats out of it.

Nice geometry moves with caustic there:
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Old 09-02-2012, 01:13 PM   #3
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Yes, video is in low resolution 640x360px (for faster rendering). I am sorry this fact, but source video on my harddisc is in better quality and youtube coverted this to the result like you can see. I will not improve this video, because i not have time for this and i plan upload next music video in better quality in the following weeks.
Thank you very much for nice tips. I really appreciate it.
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my next creation [in 1080p ]
Thread Of Illusion (link on Youtube)
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There's a tangible improvement in your second creation. The improved video quality was much appreciated both visually and auditory.
looking forward to the next
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Old 01-08-2012, 06:02 PM   #6
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Wink music visualization

Hi, i have new music video, but it's more about music than about animation.
So i hope you'll like it.

3071-Versatile(link on YouTube)

Details:
video background is created in blender
-few squares with randomly change color, grid change color by sound
-glow and blur effect
foreground
-one sphere with transparent glass material
-plane with frequency wave - generated by Wave Candy(plugin in FLs)
-glow and blur effect

thanks for watch and maybe in future i do some more massive objects like cars or live creatures
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