Spearman

grapix · 26-04-2012, 07:45 AM

Here is my latest work inspired by a concept from Atlantica Online game.
Modeled and rendered in Modo.

ZenMan · 26-04-2012, 10:35 AM

Really great work as it stands. But it seems generic, if you don't mind the crit.
He does not seem to have any expression or feeling at all. Kind of a doll like gaze into the abyss like my gf has.
Also he is a warrior, his clothes should be full of irregular dirt, scratches, blood maybe a mixture of fresh and old. Imagine they have to fight in all types of weather conditions, the blade would have dry mud, dirt, grit, grime, and more blood.
Again, great model but needs to be taken to an extra level.

grapix · 26-04-2012, 10:47 AM

Thanks Ajdin,
I love the good critique , your interpretation of this render is quite correct from one stand of point and he could be a more expressive in a ways you have mentioned. I have some dirt layers in my textures but it was a matter of choice how much to expose those. Maybe i'll get him in a less generic pose and face expression later but I was in a bit hurry to get him done for my demo reel which I have to finish in a next couple of days.
Cheers,
Toni.

parleee · 27-04-2012, 03:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zenman

kind of a doll like gaze into the abyss like my gf has.

Lol.

Nikizar · 27-04-2012, 07:53 AM

looks good, a little touch up here and there, and it will be great

26-04-2012, 07:45 AM	#1
grapix Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bosnia and Herzegovina Posts: 146 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Spearman Here is my latest work inspired by a concept from Atlantica Online game. Modeled and rendered in Modo. Attached Images Last edited by grapix; 26-04-2012 at 07:47 AM..

26-04-2012, 10:35 AM	#2
ZenMan Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Berlin/London Posts: 343 Thanks: 13 Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Really great work as it stands. But it seems generic, if you don't mind the crit. He does not seem to have any expression or feeling at all. Kind of a doll like gaze into the abyss like my gf has. Also he is a warrior, his clothes should be full of irregular dirt, scratches, blood maybe a mixture of fresh and old. Imagine they have to fight in all types of weather conditions, the blade would have dry mud, dirt, grit, grime, and more blood. Again, great model but needs to be taken to an extra level. __________________ http://ajdinbarucija.blogspot.com/ http://negativeiso.blogspot.de/ Working In Berlin at the Moment CG Artist/Fashion Photographer " Be a fanatical follower of your dreams!"

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26-04-2012, 10:47 AM	#3
grapix Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bosnia and Herzegovina Posts: 146 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks Ajdin, I love the good critique , your interpretation of this render is quite correct from one stand of point and he could be a more expressive in a ways you have mentioned. I have some dirt layers in my textures but it was a matter of choice how much to expose those. Maybe i'll get him in a less generic pose and face expression later but I was in a bit hurry to get him done for my demo reel which I have to finish in a next couple of days. Cheers, Toni.

27-04-2012, 07:53 AM	#5
Nikizar Registered User Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Ukraine Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	looks good, a little touch up here and there, and it will be great

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