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Old 26-04-2012, 07:45 AM   #1
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Here is my latest work inspired by a concept from Atlantica Online game.
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Old 26-04-2012, 10:35 AM   #2
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Really great work as it stands. But it seems generic, if you don't mind the crit.
He does not seem to have any expression or feeling at all. Kind of a doll like gaze into the abyss like my gf has.
Also he is a warrior, his clothes should be full of irregular dirt, scratches, blood maybe a mixture of fresh and old. Imagine they have to fight in all types of weather conditions, the blade would have dry mud, dirt, grit, grime, and more blood.
Again, great model but needs to be taken to an extra level.
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Old 26-04-2012, 10:47 AM   #3
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Thanks Ajdin,
I love the good critique , your interpretation of this render is quite correct from one stand of point and he could be a more expressive in a ways you have mentioned. I have some dirt layers in my textures but it was a matter of choice how much to expose those. Maybe i'll get him in a less generic pose and face expression later but I was in a bit hurry to get him done for my demo reel which I have to finish in a next couple of days.
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Old 27-04-2012, 03:38 AM   #4
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kind of a doll like gaze into the abyss like my gf has.
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looks good, a little touch up here and there, and it will be great
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