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Old 05-05-2012, 09:59 PM   #1
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Austin Power's Fasha

I did this small little thing in my spare time in class. I've re-did some parts and got smoother movement this time around and I am currently doing the re-rendered version to make it better. Lemme know what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o0FhhU3X-Uc
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Old 06-05-2012, 11:57 AM   #2
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I think you have some good choices and overall a good vibe for the scene. but i think you should start working on the breakdowns more.
your pelvis on the characters almost doesn't move at all (check the scene between 0:12-0:16).
the lip synch need some working in overall.

I think its a good start overall, but you should try exaggerate more! push your ideas!
(when he says "oh his father!" it can be much more stronger poses!). push the breakdowns! pay attention to your arcs!

keep at it! you're getting there
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