Animation (feedback needed)

joefu · 14-05-2012, 11:45 AM

hi, i'm currently working towards creating a show-reel, and I've started working on a short animation. although its still in a blocking stage, i would love to get feed back before going on to the next stage. thanks and any feed back will be appreciated.
thanks in advance

Link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KssYBBEc25Q

Hugo_Luna · 15-05-2012, 12:03 AM

Kinda hard to say what u are looking for. You have the key points placed and some intermedian, still missing the smooth moves of the animation. Put some updates of how its is going. See ya.

joefu · 15-05-2012, 08:53 AM

thanks for the reply, i'll work on it

chubu · 15-05-2012, 02:53 PM

I think you should push more to the extreme in the golden poses. the throw looks really weak.
try looking at this short animation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2kQ83_4RdkA

Try pausing the video on the extreme poses and study them, then try to reflect it on your character.

keep updating, this got potential. :-)

joefu · 15-05-2012, 03:06 PM

thanks for the feed back, i'm doing a reference to help me as well

joefu · 17-05-2012, 10:18 PM

ok i've done a few adjustment as suggested, the timing is a bit out of place, and some of the follow through are missing but i'm still working on it. as usual i need feed back to help me polish it to its final stage.

i feel like some poses could have been pushed but i'll let you be the judge of that.

thanks

link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hg7bm...ature=youtu.be

14-05-2012, 11:45 AM	#1
joefu Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Animation (feedback needed) hi, i'm currently working towards creating a show-reel, and I've started working on a short animation. although its still in a blocking stage, i would love to get feed back before going on to the next stage. thanks and any feed back will be appreciated. thanks in advance Link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KssYBBEc25Q

15-05-2012, 02:53 PM	#4
chubu Stranger Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 257 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	I think you should push more to the extreme in the golden poses. the throw looks really weak. try looking at this short animation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2kQ83_4RdkA Try pausing the video on the extreme poses and study them, then try to reflect it on your character. keep updating, this got potential. :-) __________________ My Portfolio: http://www.wix.com/guyzinger/myportfolio My blog: http://guyzinger.wordpress.com/

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15-05-2012, 12:03 AM	#2
Hugo_Luna Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Kinda hard to say what u are looking for. You have the key points placed and some intermedian, still missing the smooth moves of the animation. Put some updates of how its is going. See ya.

15-05-2012, 08:53 AM	#3
joefu Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the reply, i'll work on it

15-05-2012, 03:06 PM	#5
joefu Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the feed back, i'm doing a reference to help me as well

17-05-2012, 10:18 PM	#6
joefu Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok i've done a few adjustment as suggested, the timing is a bit out of place, and some of the follow through are missing but i'm still working on it. as usual i need feed back to help me polish it to its final stage. i feel like some poses could have been pushed but i'll let you be the judge of that. thanks link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hg7bm...ature=youtu.be

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