Sketchbook MK II

Krallis · 28-05-2012, 01:53 AM

Ive decided it may be a better move to start a sketchbook that I can post everything I'm working on into.
As with my current project I've taken it back to the very start and im going to redesign it from the very beginning.
Im going to sketch some stuff out on paper over the next day or so.

To begin with I've also uploaded a rough WIP of a gun im working on.

Here's to improving

Krallis · 30-05-2012, 12:41 AM

Quick sketch of a mask.
Trying a different way of modelling.

Perversonality · 30-05-2012, 08:02 AM

The gun is interesting but I'm having trouble working out how someone would hold it comfortably with the supports at the front. Is it supposed to be hand-held or is it due to be mounted?

The mask is quite nice, but I think you could do with getting a good model of the head that would go under it as it looks very uncomfortable right now! What was the new workflow you used?

Krallis · 31-05-2012, 12:56 AM

Yeah the gun was just a quickly done rough sketch.
Not something im really bringing forward.

I am however doing some collab work with one of my Uni mates.
And ive got some sketches for the preliminary stages of that.

Also I did build the helmet over a head and made sure it fitted, however it again was just a sketch done from some basic concept art.

Krallis · 31-05-2012, 12:58 AM

More of my sketches from the collab project.

Krallis · 31-05-2012, 01:00 AM

Even more sketches. Rough out sin UDK aswell.

Krallis · 31-05-2012, 01:02 AM

Yeah this is a big collab thing we're doing and im hoping to learn a lot over summer while making it.
and to improve my horrid 2d skills aswell.

Krallis · 01-06-2012, 12:51 AM

Updated my female basemesh/anatomy study.
I need to fix the head though. The mouth is kind of broken.

Krallis · 01-06-2012, 09:36 PM

Rough male basemesh.
Few things to fix, but its ok as it stands.

xxxcubanxxx · 02-06-2012, 02:25 PM

Anatomy needs lots of work, make sure to use reference, don't try to outline every muscle as it is meaning (there's flesh between them) keep it up

Krallis · 02-06-2012, 05:08 PM

I was actually trying to not do that >_>
godammit, gonna spend more time on it then...

Krallis · 02-06-2012, 06:18 PM

Found some more references and im reworking his anatomy.

One of my references just so u see what im working from.
http://nononsensemusclebuildingxx.co...muscle-man.jpg

Tank[NL] · 02-06-2012, 07:24 PM

ALWAYS have reference. no matter what you make, grab reference and lots of it. especially when doing a study, where you are aiming to learn

atm, and not to be mean, you anatomy is just plain wrong. my advice would be to start over. grab a good basemesh of a human figure and first study the musles. look up the musles on the internet, grab an actual book, whatever, and keep that reference near you. human anatomy is arguably one of the hardest things to get right and to get it right takes a lot of work and a lot of studying.

i know, i've had to make the human skeleton and a large portion of the muscles that we humans have for an anatomy class. i can tell you, i learned a lot and i became a better artist because of it. so really study

gl

Krallis · 02-06-2012, 08:07 PM

I have got actual books and I have/am using them. Along with internet reference and the like.

Krallis · 02-06-2012, 08:57 PM

update.

28-05-2012, 01:53 AM	#1
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Sketchbook MK II Ive decided it may be a better move to start a sketchbook that I can post everything I'm working on into. As with my current project I've taken it back to the very start and im going to redesign it from the very beginning. Im going to sketch some stuff out on paper over the next day or so. To begin with I've also uploaded a rough WIP of a gun im working on. Here's to improving Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP Last edited by Krallis; 09-10-2012 at 02:26 PM..

30-05-2012, 12:41 AM	#2
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Quick sketch of a mask. Trying a different way of modelling. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

30-05-2012, 08:02 AM	#3
Perversonality Nick/Spud/Spudmonkey Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Reading(ish), Engerlandshire Posts: 2,766 Thanks: 23 Thanked 54 Times in 51 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	The gun is interesting but I'm having trouble working out how someone would hold it comfortably with the supports at the front. Is it supposed to be hand-held or is it due to be mounted? The mask is quite nice, but I think you could do with getting a good model of the head that would go under it as it looks very uncomfortable right now! What was the new workflow you used? __________________ My homepage mostly designed to show off my <400 triangle low poly models My physical model shop: Buy my crap

31-05-2012, 12:56 AM	#4
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Yeah the gun was just a quickly done rough sketch. Not something im really bringing forward. I am however doing some collab work with one of my Uni mates. And ive got some sketches for the preliminary stages of that. Also I did build the helmet over a head and made sure it fitted, however it again was just a sketch done from some basic concept art. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

31-05-2012, 12:58 AM	#5
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	More of my sketches from the collab project. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

31-05-2012, 01:00 AM	#6
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Even more sketches. Rough out sin UDK aswell. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

31-05-2012, 01:02 AM	#7
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Yeah this is a big collab thing we're doing and im hoping to learn a lot over summer while making it. and to improve my horrid 2d skills aswell. __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

01-06-2012, 12:51 AM	#8
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Updated my female basemesh/anatomy study. I need to fix the head though. The mouth is kind of broken. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

01-06-2012, 09:36 PM	#9
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Rough male basemesh. Few things to fix, but its ok as it stands. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

02-06-2012, 02:25 PM	#10
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,211 Thanks: 159 Thanked 162 Times in 154 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Anatomy needs lots of work, make sure to use reference, don't try to outline every muscle as it is meaning (there's flesh between them) keep it up __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

02-06-2012, 05:08 PM	#11
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I was actually trying to not do that >_> godammit, gonna spend more time on it then... __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

02-06-2012, 06:18 PM	#12
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Found some more references and im reworking his anatomy. One of my references just so u see what im working from. http://nononsensemusclebuildingxx.co...muscle-man.jpg Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

02-06-2012, 07:24 PM	#13
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	ALWAYS have reference. no matter what you make, grab reference and lots of it. especially when doing a study, where you are aiming to learn atm, and not to be mean, you anatomy is just plain wrong. my advice would be to start over. grab a good basemesh of a human figure and first study the musles. look up the musles on the internet, grab an actual book, whatever, and keep that reference near you. human anatomy is arguably one of the hardest things to get right and to get it right takes a lot of work and a lot of studying. i know, i've had to make the human skeleton and a large portion of the muscles that we humans have for an anatomy class. i can tell you, i learned a lot and i became a better artist because of it. so really study gl __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty?

02-06-2012, 08:07 PM	#14
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I have got actual books and I have/am using them. Along with internet reference and the like. __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

02-06-2012, 08:57 PM	#15
Krallis D3 Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,018 Thanks: 21 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	update. Attached Images __________________ Softimage User. ------------------------------------------------ University Project--FINISHED Nadir-- FINISHED Starfighter: Kavak-- WIP

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