Animation: albert's 24

rasa · 12-12-2003, 06:07 PM

This is my first short movie : Albert's 24

rasa · 12-12-2003, 06:11 PM

a pic

Bluder · 12-12-2003, 06:14 PM

nice movie, funny idea =)

rasa · 14-12-2003, 07:10 PM

thanks

more critics are welcome

dalslångedjonas · 18-12-2003, 01:19 PM

nice textures and i like the the hole idea with thw movie.

rasa · 18-12-2003, 01:27 PM

Thank you dear dalslångedjonas

Cryptorchild · 06-01-2004, 03:28 PM

HI there girly... U know I love it... The textures are greate and the lightning... It´s a one of a cind animation!

Greate job!!!
I hope we all get to geather soon and party!

davebaer · 06-01-2004, 09:26 PM

Ha ha! that was kewl at the end. nice concept.

Just a few crits if you dont mind.
1. The movement is kinda slow. Maybe it's supposed to be to fit with the music, but I felt like it was dragging on a few times.

2. The characters feet are sliding. Check your animation curves and make his feet stick when they touch the ground.

3. The cat's texture is swimming. When he moves, the texture flows thru him.

Other than that, nice idea. I like.

Still Dead · 06-01-2004, 10:30 PM

Hi

I liked your movie alot, the stopmotion characters on
the wall are amazing.

Cheers

----
Still Dead (as Leo)

--Jag kommer nog först på måndag, hälsa de andra det.
kan inte ta mig till dalslånged den här veckan.

Goraaz · 15-04-2004, 02:24 AM

I liked this animation. Love the design

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12-12-2003, 06:07 PM	#1
rasa Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Animation: albert's 24 This is my first short movie : Albert's 24 Last edited by rasa; 12-12-2003 at 06:10 PM..

12-12-2003, 06:11 PM	#2
rasa Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	a pic Attached Images

12-12-2003, 06:14 PM	#3
Bluder Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: sweden, Trollhättan Posts: 134 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice movie, funny idea =) __________________ mmm.meindbender.com

14-12-2003, 07:10 PM	#4
rasa Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks more critics are welcome Last edited by rasa; 15-12-2003 at 12:16 PM..

18-12-2003, 01:19 PM	#5
dalslångedjonas Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: dals långed Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	werry fine nice textures and i like the the hole idea with thw movie. __________________ from dals långed!!!11

18-12-2003, 01:27 PM	#6
rasa Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you dear dalslångedjonas

06-01-2004, 03:28 PM	#7
Cryptorchild Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	HI there girly... U know I love it... The textures are greate and the lightning... It´s a one of a cind animation! Greate job!!! I hope we all get to geather soon and party! __________________ You’re young, you’re drunk, you’re in bed, you have knives; sh*t happens

06-01-2004, 09:26 PM	#8
davebaer Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Miami Beach, Florida Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ha ha! that was kewl at the end. nice concept. Just a few crits if you dont mind. 1. The movement is kinda slow. Maybe it's supposed to be to fit with the music, but I felt like it was dragging on a few times. 2. The characters feet are sliding. Check your animation curves and make his feet stick when they touch the ground. 3. The cat's texture is swimming. When he moves, the texture flows thru him. Other than that, nice idea. I like. __________________ Dave Baer Modeler, Animator, Conceptual Artist, and all around great guy! ICQ: 3201872 MSN: jerryatricks@hotmail.com Yahoo: dave_baer_1 My online portfolio: BRAINSWELL Come check out Simply Maya! A great place for beginners learning to model in Maya.

06-01-2004, 10:30 PM	#9
Still Dead Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: home Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hello Hi I liked your movie alot, the stopmotion characters on the wall are amazing. Cheers ---- Still Dead (as Leo) --Jag kommer nog först på måndag, hälsa de andra det. kan inte ta mig till dalslånged den här veckan. __________________ Paul where are you?!!

15-04-2004, 02:24 AM	#10
Goraaz Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: London Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice I liked this animation. Love the design Hälsningar från Dals Långed

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