Skyline

[neo_mosher_zion]

here is my current project, its a nissan skyline. or its going to be. when im done im going to style it up with some body kits and lights. but lets get the stock version first.

crits would be most helpful

[neo_mosher_zion]

update

[_tofu]

coming along nicely, but your mesh seems really messed up in places causing some wierd pinching.

[neo_mosher_zion]

could someone cricle all the pinches that they can see and post it back up so i can try to fix them?

i see some on the doors and ive tried to fix them but they clearly need more work.... damn miss placed verts!!!!

[_tofu]

just circled a few which i spotted at a quick glance. it's nothing major, just some tri's which will need tweaking by the looks of it.

[neo_mosher_zion]

in this pic you can see that some of thoughs actualy are what that car is supposed to look like. corner of the glass ill try and fix, and the partnear the wheel well ill get on pretty soon.

heres one of my many many ref pics

[R2Wrace2win]

nice, but some of the mesh looks a little bumpy, such as above the front wheel well, I know the fender does have a little pitch to it,
but in the refrence picture it looks smooth, your kinda jumps a little
but keep it going other wise its lookin nice

[VWporsche]

lookin good, but your rear fender flare is WAY too much. u almost seem to be modeling it w/ a wide body kit on it (im a HUGE skyline fan, so non stock things tend to pop out to me).. anyway, heres a shot right down the side, that shows how much the fender comes out, on a more or less stock r34 (hes got hood pins, and different mirrors... m3 style ones maybe?):



see, it comes out VERY little... just figured i would put in my $0.02. thanks for listening

[neo_mosher_zion]

heres a update on the front bumper

[neo_mosher_zion]

no coments on the front of the car?

[SNap]

It is ok but you missed a few edges/details. I don't know how much detail you want in this car.

[Nitro boy]

looks great, but it needs some work, and a little adjusting...

[neo_mosher_zion]

thanks SNap007be


i didnt see that, ill get on it...might be a while though hopefully i wont have to dig to find this thread. lolany other crits are still welcome

[neo_mosher_zion]

update

[neo_mosher_zion]

update
i made a addiction to the light fixture cause i hated the rounded garbadge. oh well we'll see how ya ppl think

note im edging along in this project seeing if it makes a difference in the normal me when i rush though the car in like 5-6 days... note most of my cars have been made in a week... most less then.