new famale

arreal · 30-12-2003, 02:31 PM

I start my second character,now I finished head,body still in progress.c&c please,modeled in 3dmax3.0

arreal · 30-12-2003, 02:33 PM

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arreal · 30-12-2003, 02:38 PM

ColeKindred · 30-12-2003, 03:19 PM

I like the form of the head alot. She looks young is that what your going for? One thing that might improve the structure imo is if you made the brow line and the line under the eye less harsh. Then again that might be the look you want. Really nice start.

SAPPER POPOV · 30-12-2003, 03:32 PM

nice modelling !

( why max 3.0 when there is excellent 5.0 ? 5.1 ? or 6 !!! ) lol

I like this shape , i like the nose

I think left view is a little alien style , cause the shape of head is a little square and she has a too big skull .

the ear attachement to the head has a problem too .

Wherever , good job ! nice modelling !

sarN · 30-12-2003, 03:34 PM

looks great! some crits from me.... the ear looks messy, not nearly as smooth as the rest of th emesh, and you need to bring back some of the verts of the eye. Other than that, it looks very clean and smooth, nice work!

arreal · 31-12-2003, 08:59 AM

thanks every one, i use 4.0 just for animation,because my machine is not every powerful,pIII667.All I use is just poly modeling,so I think model in 3.0 is enough to me now.
And it's my first time to model a detail ear then attached to the head,can some tell me or post a wire how to do it correctly?
About the side,Alien head?Maybe she is a clever girl

,I will fix it and the eye problem.
PS:HAPPY NEW YEAR!

SAPPER POPOV · 31-12-2003, 10:06 AM

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Originally posted by arreal

And it's my first time to model a detail ear then attached to the head,can some tell me or post a wire how to do it correctly?

i think u could look at my wip " woman face here

" at page 2 n 3 , i have a lot of problem with ear , and step by step , i have obtain a very very nice ear ( imo

) .

the only way are anatomy book

ps : u're model is really nice ! i like , she has this little thing who make me seems she's alive . a very good beginning

arreal · 31-12-2003, 02:38 PM

Thank you,SAPPER POPOV.I'll check it out.
And I modified the head.

arreal · 31-12-2003, 02:41 PM

And here's the body which still in progress.

arreal · 31-12-2003, 02:45 PM

body back

chaos_seed · 31-12-2003, 03:08 PM

yeah there is still work to do on the body the head looks fine mybe we could dee a wire just to check a few things...
Last head render seemed a bit boxy maybe it's just the view...
keep it up and happy new year everyone !

arreal · 01-01-2004, 01:22 AM

I modified head,now it seens more round

arreal · 01-01-2004, 01:26 AM

add some detail to the body

Shadowhunter Da · 01-01-2004, 01:50 AM

I'm no pro modeler, it looks really good, but here are my critiques...

1. It may just be the angle, but the arm looks bent backwards too much.

2. Looks like saggy breasts instead of shoulder blades.

3. The butt looks flat, but may be the angle of the shot.

30-12-2003, 02:31 PM	#1
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	new famale I start my second character,now I finished head,body still in progress.c&c please,modeled in 3dmax3.0 Attached Images

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arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	front Attached Images

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30-12-2003, 03:32 PM	#5
SAPPER POPOV Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: FRANCE Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	:) nice modelling ! ( why max 3.0 when there is excellent 5.0 ? 5.1 ? or 6 !!! ) lol I like this shape , i like the nose I think left view is a little alien style , cause the shape of head is a little square and she has a too big skull . the ear attachement to the head has a problem too . Wherever , good job ! nice modelling ! __________________ one day ...

31-12-2003, 08:59 AM	#7
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks every one, i use 4.0 just for animation,because my machine is not every powerful,pIII667.All I use is just poly modeling,so I think model in 3.0 is enough to me now. And it's my first time to model a detail ear then attached to the head,can some tell me or post a wire how to do it correctly? About the side,Alien head?Maybe she is a clever girl,I will fix it and the eye problem. PS:HAPPY NEW YEAR!

30-12-2003, 03:19 PM	#4
ColeKindred Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Rochester NY Posts: 148 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like the form of the head alot. She looks young is that what your going for? One thing that might improve the structure imo is if you made the brow line and the line under the eye less harsh. Then again that might be the look you want. Really nice start.

30-12-2003, 03:34 PM	#6
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	looks great! some crits from me.... the ear looks messy, not nearly as smooth as the rest of th emesh, and you need to bring back some of the verts of the eye. Other than that, it looks very clean and smooth, nice work!

31-12-2003, 02:38 PM	#9
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you,SAPPER POPOV.I'll check it out. And I modified the head. Attached Images

31-12-2003, 02:41 PM	#10
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	And here's the body which still in progress. Attached Images

31-12-2003, 02:45 PM	#11
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	body back Attached Images

31-12-2003, 03:08 PM	#12
chaos_seed Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: france Posts: 138 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah there is still work to do on the body the head looks fine mybe we could dee a wire just to check a few things... Last head render seemed a bit boxy maybe it's just the view... keep it up and happy new year everyone !

01-01-2004, 01:22 AM	#13
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I modified head,now it seens more round Attached Images

01-01-2004, 01:26 AM	#14
arreal Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: shanghai,china Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	add some detail to the body Attached Images

01-01-2004, 01:50 AM	#15
Shadowhunter Da Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: FL Posts: 33 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm no pro modeler, it looks really good, but here are my critiques... 1. It may just be the angle, but the arm looks bent backwards too much. 2. Looks like saggy breasts instead of shoulder blades. 3. The butt looks flat, but may be the angle of the shot. Attached Images

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