W.I.P Slayer

rjsmal · 30-01-2004, 04:55 AM

What's up everybody long time.
here is a new character that i'm making named slayer so hope you like it heads finished need texture and comment's are welcome.
peace

rjsmal · 30-01-2004, 05:06 AM

or is this one better?

LOUcifer · 30-01-2004, 06:06 AM

Cool character! Can we see a wire? I do have one crit though, it looks as if the linework on the sides of the face form heart shapes. I assume that wasn't intentional. Very good start, Can't wait for another update!

Holo · 30-01-2004, 08:03 AM

But IMO the spikes are a bit over the top, and the patterns on the chest could use more attention.

btw..are u using Lightwave ?

T0XIC · 30-01-2004, 11:47 AM

yeah the spikes are a bit much, but it's very nice in general- Can we get a profile view?

rjsmal · 30-01-2004, 11:54 PM

thanks for the comment but if i understand it correctly the spike's are to much.

@ loucifer
here is the wire and i'm going to change the heart shape because i didn't notice it in the beginn so thnx for the comment.

@holo-3dt
i don't use lightwave but cinema 4d but a question did you like the one with out spike's better or do you mean that there are too much spike's >?<

@ toxic
thnx fot the comment maybe it's gonna sound dom but mmmm what is a profile view :$ ????

peace

rjsmal · 31-01-2004, 01:39 AM

MonteCristo · 31-01-2004, 02:59 AM

Yeah I must say that I agree with Holo on this, the spikes are a bit OTT. I think it's because the head looks so sleak and areodynamic, and the multitude of spikes seem to work against that visual language. I recommend rethinking them and perhaps designing them to work with the rest of the head than against it. But hey bro, it's your thing, there aren't any rules. Do as you think best.

rjsmal · 31-01-2004, 04:21 AM

@MonteCristo-3DT

your right it's my thing but i think it's important to lissen to other people like your self.
and i was thinking, y'all didn't like the spike's so i went looking for something nicer and i got a idea and that's thanks to y'all so that's why it's important to lissen to other people so thnx for the comment

peace

p.s let me know if you got a idea because 2 minds are greater than one

rjsmal · 03-02-2004, 04:33 AM

a small update this is the areodynamic version with out spike's
so how is this version better.
peace.

T0XIC · 03-02-2004, 05:20 AM

Quote:

@ toxic
thnx fot the comment maybe it's gonna sound dom but mmmm what is a profile view :$ ????

It's a side view- not at angle, but straight in from the side

And already I can see some stuff on that halfway view that wasnt clear before... for example, he doesn't have much of a nose

MonteCristo · 03-02-2004, 05:20 AM

Yeah I'm liking that a lot better, it's a lot subtler. Very Guyver.

rjsmal · 03-02-2004, 05:28 AM

@T0XIC
i didn't want to give it a nois but i did give it a bump at the point where the nois should be so it's a litter bigger.

@MonteCristo-3DT
thnx for the comment i think it looks better to but i made it look a little like guyver but i didn't want to make it a real guyver but some aspect of guyver are in it

peace

rjsmal · 03-02-2004, 08:04 AM

here is a color test so wich one is the best the color and with or with out reflection ??

peace

Incitatus · 03-02-2004, 08:15 AM

noooo

pls make a nice dark scaly skin for him, the model deserves it

30-01-2004, 04:55 AM	#1
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	W.I.P Slayer What's up everybody long time. here is a new character that i'm making named slayer so hope you like it heads finished need texture and comment's are welcome. peace __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

30-01-2004, 05:06 AM	#2
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	or is this one better? __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

30-01-2004, 06:06 AM	#3
LOUcifer polygon manipulator Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Boston,Ma Posts: 78 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cool character! Can we see a wire? I do have one crit though, it looks as if the linework on the sides of the face form heart shapes. I assume that wasn't intentional. Very good start, Can't wait for another update! __________________ www.visionsoftammaro.com 3D Artist Tilted Mill Entertainment

30-01-2004, 08:03 AM	#4
Holo Rusty Wireframe Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Maple, Ontario, Canada Posts: 616 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Its a good start. But IMO the spikes are a bit over the top, and the patterns on the chest could use more attention. btw..are u using Lightwave ? __________________ "Despite the High cost of Living, It Remains Popular" -Mark. K. Lightwave User VV -- DW IV -- VV http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=65851

30-01-2004, 11:47 AM	#5
T0XIC Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: NJ USA Posts: 224 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah the spikes are a bit much, but it's very nice in general- Can we get a profile view? __________________ Steps down from soap box

30-01-2004, 11:54 PM	#6
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	thanks for the comment but if i understand it correctly the spike's are to much. @ loucifer here is the wire and i'm going to change the heart shape because i didn't notice it in the beginn so thnx for the comment. @holo-3dt i don't use lightwave but cinema 4d but a question did you like the one with out spike's better or do you mean that there are too much spike's >?< @ toxic thnx fot the comment maybe it's gonna sound dom but mmmm what is a profile view :$ ???? peace __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS Last edited by rjsmal; 31-01-2004 at 01:38 AM..

31-01-2004, 01:39 AM	#7
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Wire __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

31-01-2004, 02:59 AM	#8
MonteCristo Can't stay away. Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: UK Posts: 2,664 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	Yeah I must say that I agree with Holo on this, the spikes are a bit OTT. I think it's because the head looks so sleak and areodynamic, and the multitude of spikes seem to work against that visual language. I recommend rethinking them and perhaps designing them to work with the rest of the head than against it. But hey bro, it's your thing, there aren't any rules. Do as you think best.

31-01-2004, 04:21 AM	#9
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	@MonteCristo-3DT your right it's my thing but i think it's important to lissen to other people like your self. and i was thinking, y'all didn't like the spike's so i went looking for something nicer and i got a idea and that's thanks to y'all so that's why it's important to lissen to other people so thnx for the comment peace p.s let me know if you got a idea because 2 minds are greater than one __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

03-02-2004, 04:33 AM	#10
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	a small update this is the areodynamic version with out spike's so how is this version better. peace. __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

03-02-2004, 05:20 AM	#12
MonteCristo Can't stay away. Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: UK Posts: 2,664 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	Yeah I'm liking that a lot better, it's a lot subtler. Very Guyver.

03-02-2004, 05:28 AM	#13
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	@T0XIC i didn't want to give it a nois but i did give it a bump at the point where the nois should be so it's a litter bigger. @MonteCristo-3DT thnx for the comment i think it looks better to but i made it look a little like guyver but i didn't want to make it a real guyver but some aspect of guyver are in it peace __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

03-02-2004, 08:04 AM	#14
rjsmal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 494 Thanks: 13 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	here is a color test so wich one is the best the color and with or with out reflection ?? peace __________________ "Positive Warrior" Rjs-Mal Website My Wip's My Finals Maxon Cinema 4D R10 Zbrush3 Photoshop CS

03-02-2004, 08:15 AM	#15
Incitatus Murdoch? That crazy fool! Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Bergen, Norway Posts: 374 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	noooo pls make a nice dark scaly skin for him, the model deserves it __________________ Panic, it crept up my spine like first rising vibes of an acid frenzy. All these horrible realities began to dawn on me. Here I was, alone in Las Vegas, completely twisted on drugs.. Liv www.lastgreatwar.net

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