Rikku Sketch

Androgs · 16-02-2004, 04:46 AM

this sketch is just a study for me to develop cartoon style

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I take a reference from a pic and redraw her.
Her name is Rikku and she belongs to Final Fantasy X-2 RPG.
Crits are welcome

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Ironbuket · 16-02-2004, 05:51 AM

I like this one very much

Chris-3DT · 16-02-2004, 06:15 AM

me too

bullethead · 16-02-2004, 08:49 AM

Yes, very good..Looks just like her. Keep up the good work.

Johny · 16-02-2004, 01:04 PM

looks good, but the bad thing is that you drawn it at a line sheet

Androgs · 16-02-2004, 05:40 PM

Thanks All

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Starwars :

hehe, sorry for that, I draw her just for another sketch study, next time I promise to make my serious work with my idea in a blank sheet.

RickStefani · 16-02-2004, 07:29 PM

You really captured how cute she is. Very nice work

Androgs · 17-02-2004, 04:03 AM

Thanks Rick

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Here's another study, this time I redraw is Yuna, one of Rikku's companion. I'm now want to study more about sketch, so next time I just post my work here, feel free to give a crits

.

I decide to use a blank paper now

.Just like Rikku's image, this Yuna piece is also a redraw from a piece that already remain.
Hope I can make my own in next post.

Thanks for your time

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Ironbuket · 17-02-2004, 04:21 AM

Hmm, cant quite put my finger on it, but theres something weird about the perspective you have applied to that picture

On top of that her torso looks a strange shape.

I liked the first one much better

Androgs · 17-02-2004, 04:30 AM

Thanks for the crits, Ironbuket. Any other crits are surely welcome here

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RickStefani · 17-02-2004, 05:41 AM

Great pic. I also agree about the hand. The hand is close to you so it should seem larger like the gun but the fingers are a small as the one far away.

edit. also the angle of the fingers too. They should be at a direct overhead view like the palm is.

Fix that and I would say it is done. Unless you want to color it.

Androgs · 19-02-2004, 07:21 AM

Thanks for the comment Rick

. I found my self a lot of error for her sketch especially about the perspective view, her hand, finger and her breast. I'll study more from my mistakes I take here.

here's another study for male anatomy especially at abdomen part, already acceptable or not?

Corky13 · 19-02-2004, 07:27 AM

h,mmmmm nice sixpacks

but the breastmuscles are weird o_O

Ironbuket · 19-02-2004, 08:47 AM

Err, nm

RickStefani · 19-02-2004, 09:51 AM

The abs look good. The Lats would be bigger thoug if the abs and pecks are that big. Looks really good. Keep studying because you are on your way to becoming great. Just as a disclaimer, I need to work on mine too. I work out all the time so I can notice something a miss but I have some issues getting it perfect to. I am mostly studying the womens form in the gym.

16-02-2004, 04:46 AM	#1
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Rikku Sketch this sketch is just a study for me to develop cartoon style . I take a reference from a pic and redraw her. Her name is Rikku and she belongs to Final Fantasy X-2 RPG. Crits are welcome . Attached Images __________________ my portofolio

16-02-2004, 05:51 AM	#2
Ironbuket meri kurisumasu Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: London, England Ayu wa kawaii desu ne Posts: 753 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like this one very much __________________ "If you are able, save for them a place inside of you and one backward glance when you are leaving, for the places they can no longer go. Be not ashamed to say you loved them, though you may or may not always have. Take what they have left and what they have taught you with their dying and keep it with your own. And in that time when men decide and feel safe to call the war insane, take one moment to embrace those gentle heroes you left behind." - Major Michael Davis O'Donnell

16-02-2004, 06:15 AM	#3
Chris-3DT Threedy Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 2,361 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	me too __________________ [b]Christian

16-02-2004, 08:49 AM	#4
bullethead mmmuuaaahahahhaahahahahah Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Milwaukee, Wi Posts: 268 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yes, very good..Looks just like her. Keep up the good work. __________________ Splines are the devils minions Click here to see my Ferrari Aurea WIP Click here to see my Russian Isu-152 Tank(WIP) Click here to see my WIP 2Door humvee for HL2 mod ------------------------------------------- "Life is but a dream in someones head" Bullethead ------------------------------------------- AIM=St Metallica MSN=bullethead_4@hotmail.com

16-02-2004, 01:04 PM	#5
Johny Pixel Sodomizer Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Lisbon Posts: 685 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks good, but the bad thing is that you drawn it at a line sheet __________________ Temporary portfolio displaying just 5 works....

16-02-2004, 05:40 PM	#6
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Thanks All . Starwars : hehe, sorry for that, I draw her just for another sketch study, next time I promise to make my serious work with my idea in a blank sheet. __________________ my portofolio

16-02-2004, 07:29 PM	#7
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You really captured how cute she is. Very nice work __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

17-02-2004, 04:03 AM	#8
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Thanks Rick . Here's another study, this time I redraw is Yuna, one of Rikku's companion. I'm now want to study more about sketch, so next time I just post my work here, feel free to give a crits . I decide to use a blank paper now .Just like Rikku's image, this Yuna piece is also a redraw from a piece that already remain. Hope I can make my own in next post. Thanks for your time . Attached Images __________________ my portofolio

17-02-2004, 04:21 AM	#9
Ironbuket meri kurisumasu Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: London, England Ayu wa kawaii desu ne Posts: 753 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hmm, cant quite put my finger on it, but theres something weird about the perspective you have applied to that picture On top of that her torso looks a strange shape. I liked the first one much better __________________ "If you are able, save for them a place inside of you and one backward glance when you are leaving, for the places they can no longer go. Be not ashamed to say you loved them, though you may or may not always have. Take what they have left and what they have taught you with their dying and keep it with your own. And in that time when men decide and feel safe to call the war insane, take one moment to embrace those gentle heroes you left behind." - Major Michael Davis O'Donnell

17-02-2004, 04:30 AM	#10
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Thanks for the crits, Ironbuket. Any other crits are surely welcome here . __________________ my portofolio

17-02-2004, 05:41 AM	#11
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great pic. I also agree about the hand. The hand is close to you so it should seem larger like the gun but the fingers are a small as the one far away. edit. also the angle of the fingers too. They should be at a direct overhead view like the palm is. Fix that and I would say it is done. Unless you want to color it. __________________ Fatal what??? F**, forgot to save. Last edited by RickStefani; 17-02-2004 at 05:43 AM..*

19-02-2004, 07:21 AM	#12
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Thanks for the comment Rick . I found my self a lot of error for her sketch especially about the perspective view, her hand, finger and her breast. I'll study more from my mistakes I take here. here's another study for male anatomy especially at abdomen part, already acceptable or not? Attached Images __________________ my portofolio

19-02-2004, 07:27 AM	#13
Corky13 traveller in graphite Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe Austria Posts: 611 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	h,mmmmm nice sixpacks but the breastmuscles are weird o_O __________________ ...signature... impressive isn´t it ?

19-02-2004, 08:47 AM	#14
Ironbuket meri kurisumasu Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: London, England Ayu wa kawaii desu ne Posts: 753 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Err, nm __________________ "If you are able, save for them a place inside of you and one backward glance when you are leaving, for the places they can no longer go. Be not ashamed to say you loved them, though you may or may not always have. Take what they have left and what they have taught you with their dying and keep it with your own. And in that time when men decide and feel safe to call the war insane, take one moment to embrace those gentle heroes you left behind." - Major Michael Davis O'Donnell Last edited by Ironbuket; 19-02-2004 at 08:54 AM..

19-02-2004, 09:51 AM	#15
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The abs look good. The Lats would be bigger thoug if the abs and pecks are that big. Looks really good. Keep studying because you are on your way to becoming great. Just as a disclaimer, I need to work on mine too. I work out all the time so I can notice something a miss but I have some issues getting it perfect to. I am mostly studying the womens form in the gym. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

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