my latest interior...

Ferry P · 19-02-2004, 07:55 AM

it's not done yet...but it's getting there.

claWda · 19-02-2004, 08:04 AM

modeling looks very good with the exception of the stairs, they could use some work

your main problem is lighting
it doesn't look real and some areas are too lit, you should work on your lighting, it'll definately lift the image a lot

Ferry P · 19-02-2004, 08:18 AM

thx..I indeed need to work on the lighting...Im learning as we speak.
I dunno...I like the stairs!

Ninto · 19-02-2004, 09:10 AM

I like the stairs too, as well as the entire image

Kujoe · 19-02-2004, 10:04 AM

Looks great to me.Great work dude

NoJo · 19-02-2004, 10:42 AM

It's looking great apart from the lightning... Work on the light and it will look awesome

sarN · 19-02-2004, 11:27 AM

looks great, one suggestion thoug, id put a railing going down those stairs

looks like you have it on the bottom ones, but soemone could take a nasty spill. You already know the lighting needs some work, and i hope you get a nice background image there too

arthoz · 19-02-2004, 01:30 PM

i think you need something between the flooring(wood and the rest of the "floor"(white thingie) where the stairs are, i dont remember the name for it(not even in norwegian

). otherwise its lovely, i adore the furniture and carpet

FrodoBaggins · 19-02-2004, 10:13 PM

Why does the carpet have a reflection? :s

Other than that it looks sweeet!

geoMan · 19-02-2004, 10:22 PM

very well done.....
although there is some over brightness....and how bout a sky map for the outside....make it like a room on a skyscraper!

Ferry P · 20-02-2004, 06:31 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by FrodoBaggins
Why does the carpet have a reflection? :s

Other than that it looks sweeet!

It hasn't....they call those things shadows

here is an update

Zergling · 20-02-2004, 06:38 AM

pretty sweet. Much improved.

BTW, i'm starting an indoor scene. What lighting setup did you use for this scene?

Renzsu · 20-02-2004, 06:43 AM

Nice, you know you should use glossy reflections on the floors, it'll give the scene more life (assuming that the wooden floor has a transparant coating instead of a wax coating (which would still reflect somewhat)).

hm.. nevermind, it looks like you already have those in the second image?

d03boy · 20-02-2004, 02:43 PM

Windows need some glass (shininess)

otacon · 20-02-2004, 05:32 PM

Good improvement from the first render. The lighting is great around the furniture area, but it gets worse towards the far left, where the tables and chairs are. The stairs really look unstable because the only support they have is right down the middle. Also, the railings going down the stairs, and across the gap in the floor dont look right...the grey rail part shouldnt be sticking up over the wood part. It wouldnt be very fluid if you were to use the rail when walking down the stairs, you would have to lift your hand up over them. Keep up the good work!

19-02-2004, 07:55 AM	#1
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19-02-2004, 08:04 AM	#2
claWda pianist Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Sweden Posts: 873 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	modeling looks very good with the exception of the stairs, they could use some work your main problem is lighting it doesn't look real and some areas are too lit, you should work on your lighting, it'll definately lift the image a lot __________________ Robot Cab Driver - Miles Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth

19-02-2004, 08:18 AM	#3
Ferry P Ferry Passchier Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: The hague, The Netherlands Posts: 2,252 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	thx..I indeed need to work on the lighting...Im learning as we speak. I dunno...I like the stairs! __________________ Ferry Passchier portfolio http://www.ferrypasschier.nl/ Last edited by Ferry P; 19-02-2004 at 08:23 AM..

19-02-2004, 09:10 AM	#4
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19-02-2004, 10:42 AM	#6
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It's looking great apart from the lightning... Work on the light and it will look awesome __________________ huh?

19-02-2004, 11:27 AM	#7
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	looks great, one suggestion thoug, id put a railing going down those stairs looks like you have it on the bottom ones, but soemone could take a nasty spill. You already know the lighting needs some work, and i hope you get a nice background image there too

19-02-2004, 01:30 PM	#8
arthoz Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: The land of vikings Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think you need something between the flooring(wood and the rest of the "floor"(white thingie) where the stairs are, i dont remember the name for it(not even in norwegian ). otherwise its lovely, i adore the furniture and carpet __________________ Fall like night upon the foe

19-02-2004, 10:13 PM	#9
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geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow... very well done..... although there is some over brightness....and how bout a sky map for the outside....make it like a room on a skyscraper! __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

20-02-2004, 06:38 AM	#12
Zergling Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 318 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty sweet. Much improved. BTW, i'm starting an indoor scene. What lighting setup did you use for this scene? __________________ Will work for + rep.

20-02-2004, 06:43 AM	#13
Renzsu Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Netherlands.. aargh the dykes! Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice, you know you should use glossy reflections on the floors, it'll give the scene more life (assuming that the wooden floor has a transparant coating instead of a wax coating (which would still reflect somewhat)). hm.. nevermind, it looks like you already have those in the second image? __________________ Renzerispens.com Productdesignforums.com

20-02-2004, 02:43 PM	#14
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20-02-2004, 05:32 PM	#15
otacon lightwave cowboy Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: memphis Posts: 312 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Good improvement from the first render. The lighting is great around the furniture area, but it gets worse towards the far left, where the tables and chairs are. The stairs really look unstable because the only support they have is right down the middle. Also, the railings going down the stairs, and across the gap in the floor dont look right...the grey rail part shouldnt be sticking up over the wood part. It wouldnt be very fluid if you were to use the rail when walking down the stairs, you would have to lift your hand up over them. Keep up the good work!

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