character head

artist71 · 25-02-2004, 06:12 AM

This is the head of a character that I have been working on for a little while. Please feel free to give some Crits.

Thanks

Cracadoo · 25-02-2004, 06:54 AM

What crits can i give to you???
It's PERFECT!!!

X_Dror · 25-02-2004, 07:30 AM

well it is very good overall, but there r some thing that can be better:
1. the eyes are to dark and the need more reflectivness
2.and i think the skin nedd some more modification with the shader and with the colors.
besides these to things it think this is wonderfull...
edit: Oh now i notice that the ears are a bit weird... the r too fat and i think theirs shape is not so right...

artist71 · 27-02-2004, 12:24 PM

this is the image without textures and a wireframe. I did some work to the ears and when I get to the textring of the eyes I will adjust that too.

artist71 · 27-02-2004, 12:25 PM

wireframe

artist71 · 27-02-2004, 12:27 PM

when he is done he will be wearing this hat too.

thanks for any help guys

neiy0 · 27-02-2004, 03:51 PM

looks totally awsome..u've got a lot of talent..although the eyes look a little to big.the pupils that is..

artist71 · 03-03-2004, 10:06 AM

this is the guys so far without a lot of his textures.

artist71 · 03-03-2004, 10:08 AM

still need to finsh the texturing of the hat but its getting closer.

Profane · 03-03-2004, 10:41 AM

you need to work a little bit more the eyes...they look kinda flat....almost like a texture placed on a simple sphere....
anyway great job u did so far....

LesbianTaliban · 05-03-2004, 09:23 AM

OMG!

Thats VERY nicely done.

CountZero · 05-03-2004, 09:26 AM

Everything is extremely nice, except the eyes (they need to look more alive), and the hands which seems a bit too thin.

chaos_seed · 05-03-2004, 09:31 AM

Yep agree with profaneyour modeling loks really good but texture aren't good enough...
They're okay don't get me wrong but not as good as the model...
maybe with a bit more work on the lingthning highlight and a bit of bump iot'll be way better...

Anyway your maodel is really good !Keep us updated !

CountZero · 05-03-2004, 10:25 AM

I think the textures are very good, just the eye needs to be more highlighted.

Cic · 05-03-2004, 10:34 AM

Ive been thinking...... Whats the point whit one earplug thingy? The is no point of one.. You have to have 2 of them or its unrealistic.. sry.. Really nice modeling though... The eye texture is cinda dull but nice anyways!

25-02-2004, 06:12 AM	#1
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	character head This is the head of a character that I have been working on for a little while. Please feel free to give some Crits. Thanks

25-02-2004, 06:54 AM	#2
Cracadoo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Belgrade, Serbia Posts: 436 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	What crits can i give to you??? It's PERFECT!!! __________________ My Dominance War Entry

25-02-2004, 07:30 AM	#3
X_Dror Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Israel Posts: 189 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well it is very good overall, but there r some thing that can be better: 1. the eyes are to dark and the need more reflectivness 2.and i think the skin nedd some more modification with the shader and with the colors. besides these to things it think this is wonderfull... edit: Oh now i notice that the ears are a bit weird... the r too fat and i think theirs shape is not so right... __________________ W.I.P Piano Last edited by X_Dror; 25-02-2004 at 07:33 AM..

27-02-2004, 12:24 PM	#4
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	more work this is the image without textures and a wireframe. I did some work to the ears and when I get to the textring of the eyes I will adjust that too.

27-02-2004, 12:25 PM	#5
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wireframe wireframe

27-02-2004, 12:27 PM	#6
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	with hat when he is done he will be wearing this hat too. thanks for any help guys

27-02-2004, 03:51 PM	#7
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks totally awsome..u've got a lot of talent..although the eyes look a little to big.the pupils that is..

03-03-2004, 10:06 AM	#8
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	renders this is the guys so far without a lot of his textures.

03-03-2004, 10:08 AM	#9
artist71 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: OR Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	texturing the hat still need to finsh the texturing of the hat but its getting closer.

03-03-2004, 10:41 AM	#10
Profane Matteo Masciotti Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Italy Posts: 697 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	you need to work a little bit more the eyes...they look kinda flat....almost like a texture placed on a simple sphere.... anyway great job u did so far.... __________________ www.3dtotal.com>free stuff>tutorials>maya...there you'll find my tutorial. CLICK BELOWE http://www.threedy.com/site/forum/sh...threadid=28147

05-03-2004, 09:23 AM	#11
LesbianTaliban Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 70 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	OMG! Thats VERY nicely done.

05-03-2004, 09:26 AM	#12
CountZero Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 253 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Everything is extremely nice, except the eyes (they need to look more alive), and the hands which seems a bit too thin.

05-03-2004, 09:31 AM	#13
chaos_seed Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: france Posts: 138 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yep agree with profaneyour modeling loks really good but texture aren't good enough... They're okay don't get me wrong but not as good as the model... maybe with a bit more work on the lingthning highlight and a bit of bump iot'll be way better... Anyway your maodel is really good !Keep us updated !

05-03-2004, 10:25 AM	#14
CountZero Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 253 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think the textures are very good, just the eye needs to be more highlighted.

05-03-2004, 10:34 AM	#15
Cic Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Bærum, Norway, Europe Posts: 51 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ive been thinking...... Whats the point whit one earplug thingy? The is no point of one.. You have to have 2 of them or its unrealistic.. sry.. Really nice modeling though... The eye texture is cinda dull but nice anyways! __________________ One man once said: "Things are never perfect, they can always be improved, but I can't do it..." Uuups forgot.. that man was me!

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