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Old 27-02-2004, 11:17 PM   #1
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my fish.....

have been modelling a fish, thought I would post it on here for my first posted work..... any comments very welcome...


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Old 27-02-2004, 11:18 PM   #2
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Old 27-02-2004, 11:23 PM   #3
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Old 28-02-2004, 02:09 AM   #4
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Lookin good!!!!!

Can't wait to see this one textured, keep us updated!
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Old 28-02-2004, 04:58 AM   #5
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Ooh, nice fishy!

Nice mesh flow you have here - clean and simple. This is a good base for an uberly-detailed model (you sure you don't want to model every scale? ).
Can't find much to crit, acctualy.

This has the potencial of beeing awesome. Don't stop now.
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Old 28-02-2004, 05:31 AM   #6
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cheers for the positive comments... heres an update
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one more before I start texturing...
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Old 01-03-2004, 11:17 AM   #8
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Looks great but the eyeballs doesn't seem to be separated from the eyesocket wich looks a bit wierd. Great work otherwise.
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Old 01-03-2004, 05:24 PM   #9
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Smile cool!!!

Cool fish... I like the modeling... his eyes looks really small almost like a whale but if this is the look you want then ROCK ON.....

keep up the good work..
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Nice style. Pretty funkly looking little fish. Can't wait to see the finished version.

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Did you shift the eyes forward or is it just the angle messin with my head?
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Old 02-03-2004, 01:30 AM   #12
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Looks great but the eyeballs doesn't seem to be separated from the eyesocket wich looks a bit wierd. Great work otherwise.
yeah the eyeball and body is one piece of mesh... when I texture him up I will make them separate... just wanted to give the impression of the eye before going right in and working on it too much.
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Old 02-03-2004, 01:32 AM   #13
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Re: cool!!!

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Cool fish... I like the modeling... his eyes looks really small almost like a whale but if this is the look you want then ROCK ON.....

keep up the good work..
cheers, yeah I wanted it to have the eyes of a whale, I was interested in seeing what they eyes of a whale would look like on a relatively small fish.. I kinda like the look it gives, makes him a bit grumpy looking
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Old 02-03-2004, 01:33 AM   #14
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Did you shift the eyes forward or is it just the angle messin with my head?
might be the angle... haven't moved the eyes.
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Jaws - huge menecing fangs, a huge whisker or two :). Just kidding.. but I think from the front he looks too nice and cuddly but with dragon-wing like fins like that I don't think I can trust him - Or it's one of those fishies which looks like "Come give us a kiss", then suddenly BAM!!! U r dinner.
Awesome modelling technique. Luv the texture....
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