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Old 09-03-2004, 09:46 PM   #1
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animal: oryx antelope

last stop before going on to texturing.

any suggestions of tweeking?



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Old 09-03-2004, 11:09 PM   #2
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looks good...it feels complete...have fun texturing it..
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Old 10-03-2004, 01:33 AM   #3
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the front leg seems, on the superior part, to be more thick then the rear leg.... is it right? tho nice modeling....

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Old 10-03-2004, 03:33 AM   #4
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yep, the front leg was too thick. a bit thinner now:



and here's a wire:


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Old 10-03-2004, 03:38 AM   #5
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Looks good .
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Old 10-03-2004, 06:39 AM   #6
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NOW i think that you can go to texture...

waiting for updates

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looks very good
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Old 10-03-2004, 12:34 PM   #9
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The antelope in the photo has a much longer, thinner neck. Maybe you could find a photo reference that shows one from the side... their necks are kind of like deer necks... and the hip is higher than the withers (top of the shoulder). Yours is built a little more like a moose.

Looks pretty good, though.
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this is the reference I've used. Obviously there are different types of antelopes...

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Yeah, your model looks a lot more like this latest photo reference... doesn't look at all like the one a few posts back. Now it looks pretty good.
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Old 13-03-2004, 07:34 AM   #12
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starting the unwrapping:

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Old 13-03-2004, 10:01 AM   #13
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Did you box model this? looks really good...I'm in the process of making a stag, so any tips would be nice!
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Old 13-03-2004, 01:29 PM   #14
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i think the model is spot on for the reference pic used, its a south african antelope isnt it? like a springbok?

nice work man, should look sweet all textured up


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Old 14-03-2004, 02:31 AM   #15
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This is a very clean model indeed! I think rigging it will be a piece of cake. I have no crits for the time being, just keep it coming.
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