character head w.i.p

NoJo · 10-03-2004, 06:53 AM

here's my latest work... I need c&c so I can make this character better.... Hope you'll like it

Dedalo · 10-03-2004, 03:51 PM

Nice start , keep working.

MrArmless · 10-03-2004, 08:16 PM

indeed, post some more

will this be a character for animation?

Downup · 10-03-2004, 10:00 PM

I would find him more fun with a fat and short nose

NoJo · 11-03-2004, 07:56 AM

Dedalo : Thanks for your comment man.
MrArmless : Thanks, And yes, hopefully there will be an animation

IDownupI : Thank you, I'll give it a try

Updates will be posted soon.

NoJo · 11-03-2004, 09:15 AM

this is for you IDownupI. Personally I like the other version better though...

NoJo · 12-03-2004, 08:25 AM

hehe, I read wrong and made his whole face fat... anyway, here's an update on the small face. Give me some C&C

NoJo · 14-03-2004, 12:09 AM

updates. I really need your comments guys and girls, here is the image

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NoJo · 14-03-2004, 12:10 AM

And another image :

NoJo · 16-03-2004, 06:17 AM

No updates yet since I haven't got any time yet to work on it, and I need your comments! My treads allways has an ability to die but I don't want this to die

Well, updates will come soon....

hpslashluvr · 16-03-2004, 02:13 PM

Hehe, well, posts only die when you stop updating. I know what you mean though, it's hard to keep going when no one bothers to crit. If you post too often just asking for crits, ppl will be turned off and stop reading your thread. I got this problem too, haha look how many times I've posted on my own thread.

Can you post a close up of the ears? They look really strange on the inside. I think the reason why ppl said the nose looked better short is because the character resembles a person too much. Maybe if you extended the ears just a bit and made the nose a smudge wider (although just as long as they are now) the image would be more pleasing to the eye. Post wires too, and updates.

Did you use the Harry Potter elf tutorial (I think it's on Kreacher)? Looks rather like him.

NoJo · 17-03-2004, 07:16 AM

Thanks for your comment, I got the insperation from the kreacher tutorial but then I modeled it on my own without following the tut. Here's a close up on the ear and wires

hpslashluvr · 17-03-2004, 12:49 PM

The ear looks really jaggedy where the ridges/edges are, maybe clean that up a bit. Otherwise I think this character is really cool...are you going to clothe him? and is the rest of him going to look human?

10-03-2004, 06:53 AM	#1
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	character head w.i.p here's my latest work... I need c&c so I can make this character better.... Hope you'll like it __________________ huh?

10-03-2004, 03:51 PM	#2
Dedalo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Argentina Posts: 105 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice start , keep working. __________________ www.3dpro.com.ar El primer foro argentino de 3D.

10-03-2004, 08:16 PM	#3
MrArmless Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montreal, Quebec Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	indeed, post some more will this be a character for animation? __________________ My WIP thread (my small office room): http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=56250

10-03-2004, 10:00 PM	#4
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I would find him more fun with a fat and short nose __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

11-03-2004, 07:56 AM	#5
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for your comments everyone. Dedalo : Thanks for your comment man. MrArmless : Thanks, And yes, hopefully there will be an animation IDownupI : Thank you, I'll give it a try Updates will be posted soon. __________________ huh?

11-03-2004, 09:15 AM	#6
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is for you IDownupI. Personally I like the other version better though... __________________ huh? Last edited by NoJo; 11-03-2004 at 09:43 AM..

12-03-2004, 08:25 AM	#7
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hehe, I read wrong and made his whole face fat... anyway, here's an update on the small face. Give me some C&C __________________ huh? Last edited by NoJo; 12-03-2004 at 10:17 AM..

14-03-2004, 12:09 AM	#8
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	updates updates. I really need your comments guys and girls, here is the image : __________________ huh?

14-03-2004, 12:10 AM	#9
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	And another image : __________________ huh?

16-03-2004, 06:17 AM	#10
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	No updates yet since I haven't got any time yet to work on it, and I need your comments! My treads allways has an ability to die but I don't want this to die Well, updates will come soon.... __________________ huh?

16-03-2004, 02:13 PM	#11
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hehe, well, posts only die when you stop updating. I know what you mean though, it's hard to keep going when no one bothers to crit. If you post too often just asking for crits, ppl will be turned off and stop reading your thread. I got this problem too, haha look how many times I've posted on my own thread. Can you post a close up of the ears? They look really strange on the inside. I think the reason why ppl said the nose looked better short is because the character resembles a person too much. Maybe if you extended the ears just a bit and made the nose a smudge wider (although just as long as they are now) the image would be more pleasing to the eye. Post wires too, and updates. Did you use the Harry Potter elf tutorial (I think it's on Kreacher)? Looks rather like him. __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

17-03-2004, 07:16 AM	#12
NoJo Mr.oizo! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Right over here. Posts: 692 Posts: 236 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for your comment, I got the insperation from the kreacher tutorial but then I modeled it on my own without following the tut. Here's a close up on the ear and wires __________________ huh?

17-03-2004, 12:49 PM	#13
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The ear looks really jaggedy where the ridges/edges are, maybe clean that up a bit. Otherwise I think this character is really cool...are you going to clothe him? and is the rest of him going to look human? __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

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