Dragon Rider

[Neox]

ok something new, a semi realistic (a bit manga based) dragonrider



and the wire



oh and the standard turn around (Cult3d Files are just getting TOOOO big )

http://neox.gfx-scene.de/public/mode...onrider/05.avi

[Phynius Gauge]

Excellent. I definitely want to see update on this one .

[lilCara]

Awesome.

...but... the edges of the jacket shouldn't be round, the eyes are too far apart, and you should work more on the eyebrow area and cheeks. I can't really explain what is wrong, but it needs some small tweaking

Waiting for a masterpiece

[Neox]

his vest will get changed, didn't start modelling the folds on this, thats why its round in the corners... can't agree with the changes tho, but i'll take a look at it later when i'm doing the hair, maybe some distance to the model will be good for me

[chaos_seed]

guy this is an awsome job! ! !
Really great work everything looks fine in the modeling...Just one thing in the overall ...I'd make his face looks harder a bit like a bad guy 'cause there it looks as if he was a cooker or a merchant but not a dragon master...See waht I mean maybe get his chin bigger same for the eyebrow...

Great work I always wonder how do you guys do to model those cloth so nicely...

Keep us apdated !

[Neox]

nope definately no harder face, i don't want that stereotype, disney thingie, i don't want him to look like the bad guy, or the good guy, you don't know it till you know him... stereotypes suck
well a lot of his face is getting lost because of the gi lighting in max he looks a bit different, and with textueres he will also look changed... whatever i'm not going to change is face yet

"Great work I always wonder how do you guys do to model those cloth so nicely..."

cloth aint that hard, use your clothing for reference, look ehere it streses look how folds are moving, currently he has two stresspoints on his shirts where he sticked his shirt into his belts, another stresspoint are the collar and his shoulders, so this is where the wrinkles are going to, thats the whole thing

[niki]

great work...the cloths are very well done...
keep up...

[chaos_seed]

yeah well I konw what you mean by stéreotype but in fact I wa

[chaos_seed]

yeah well I konw what you mean by stéreotype but in fact I was more talking about reallity I mean if that guys oftren with dragon you expect him to be quiet tugh and muscular 'cause theyr'arent tiny creatures...Or else jis just a rider like horses jockey or even o castel lord with great apparas like indian maharajah on elephants...Depends what you're aiming...

But I agree with you with that stereotype idea but I must say that he looks quiet muscular so it seemed weird to me that he gets to have such a cute face...

Anyway maybe his story 'll prove me wrong like beast calm down by music or I don't know maybe somthing else

And for teh cloth I see waht you mean but it the ability of keeping the mesh clean and cuting so easaly in the mesh that iI don't get...I always think an hour then work four and ends by getting somthing I throw away...

Bye !

[Neox]

well first of all the unshaded version of his face looks a bit more tough, i just can't set up the light right to get all details i've done correct... the second thing is that i wanted him to be more the athletic kind of guy, not the barbarian, he is sporty and fast... look on guys like vega (streetfighter) oder cloud (final fantasy, advent children) both tough guys with "cute" faces, i like this kind of oxymoron, everyone thinks he just can't ride a dragon or just can't fight, and the he goes up to the air and kicks their asses

"always think an hour then work four and ends by getting somthing I throw away"

one thing... don't think! i'm serious, don't think befor doing, do it, go on you can't go wrong, you've got feeling if it looks wron to you change it, but don't do plans for edgeloops and stuff, this blocks your creativity just do it don't think about it, its like Neo in the matrix, jump over those buildings don't think about it you CAN do it

[chaos_seed]

yeah I'll try this thanks !
As for the char ok then i see what your up too can be really great thin guy quickmoves maybe has a good old sword !or couples of ropes !like chinese fighters...
Anyway really d'like to see where you're going(fantasy or scifi maybe a good old mix...)Can't wait hope you'll dig it quick ! !
Bye the way great work on the RLA project used too folow it wile a wip !Great work !

[Mr.T]

nice modelling! i really like the clothes!
great great!

[Neox]

uh girls are unfair, didn't have much time yesterday

but i did a small concept for the pants, maybe they are getting a bit wider where they are sticked in his boots, but the design is "fresh" enough I guess

hope you like it

[chaos_seed]

3:14 Man don't you ever sleep !!!
Yep agree with larger pants 'round the shoes !
Maybe you could get him those boots that some use for horses you know those that goes really high with straps It'll fit him great he kinds of remind me of the horses traineres with those tight armless jacket ! !

[Neox]

is was 8 o clock in the morning when i posted it