My First Car

Adeel · 12-03-2004, 04:31 AM

Hi All
this is my first attempt at a car.

Software 3ds max

I've learned a lot from this one, although i think much needs improvment, but i hope the second one is flawless..

Anyhow i've placed this one aside as my finished one.

I hope u all like it!

Thanks all.

Profane · 12-03-2004, 08:57 AM

wow!is it really the first car u've done?
Great job!!!

Adeel · 12-03-2004, 12:03 PM

Yes this is my first car!
Thanks Profane

kribz · 12-03-2004, 10:30 PM

well it´s certainly not bad for a first car...not bad at all....infact it´s great

g69 · 13-03-2004, 06:29 PM

wah adeel, yaar zabardast kaam hai bhai tera!
keep it up!

headlights need some tweaks though...

simply good for a 1st time

geoMan · 13-03-2004, 08:28 PM

very cool indeed....
as far as modelling is concerned.....the car's in right propotions.....
my only crit is to work more on the shader.....i have a car paint shader in my tutorial in the tutorials forum....i wud luv it if u try it....

moreover.....i think...the shadow is a bit....i cant quite say...i think u can work out for a better final render...

for the first car....i say its simply wonderful.....
keep up the good work!

-Fahad (geoMan)

Adeel · 14-03-2004, 01:44 AM

Thank you all

Well g69 u r right, the headlights do need a little tweaking, i'll fix those. thanks

And Fahad i'll certainly look at your shader tut. Thanks.

Take care

geoMan · 14-03-2004, 04:08 AM

that wud be real nice of ya.....and dont forget to post a render on that thread!

cbaristo · 14-03-2004, 10:02 PM

first car?
jesus!!

nice work.
one think: is the front logo as big as this?

see you around

Adeel · 16-03-2004, 01:08 PM

thanks

well according to the blueprint that ive used the logo proportions are identical! ive double checked that!

Adeel · 20-03-2004, 01:44 AM

And this is the rear view of the car.
the rear lights do need work, but i've finished this one. i've already started work on my next car, intend to finish that off properly.

g69 · 20-03-2004, 02:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Adeel
And this is the rear view of the car.
the rear lights do need work, but i've finished this one. i've already started work on my next car, intend to finish that off properly.

as i said its really excellent...
lekin adeel did you try camfering the edges?

unko phirse select karo aur chamfer karo (0.5 ya phir 0.1 ki amount se)
aur bhi ziyada khubsurat laghey ghi yeh gari...

and one more thing... try changing the material for the tires...
bohot hi ziyada black hai

Rest all Rocks man!!!
PS. pak se kahan se ho?

Adeel · 20-03-2004, 06:01 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by g69
as i said its really excellent...
lekin adeel did you try camfering the edges?

unko phirse select karo aur chamfer karo (0.5 ya phir 0.1 ki amount se)
aur bhi ziyada khubsurat laghey ghi yeh gari...

and one more thing... try changing the material for the tires...
bohot hi ziyada black hai

Rest all Rocks man!!!
PS. pak se kahan se ho?

Thanks g69.

Han i did chamfer the edges, i mean tumhay gardbard kidher lagrahe hay exactly, mujhay itna tu pata hay kay rear lights kay socket mei thorda kam hay, ya phir tumhara matlab hay kay OVERALL sare edges ko chamfer karo? han tyres waisay kafe black hain, will change that too!

Im from Karachi, and you?

Thanks.

geoMan · 20-03-2004, 06:09 AM

there seems to be a lot at the bottom of the doors.....some black area.....it looks like crashed from there!

g69 · 20-03-2004, 09:25 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Adeel
Thanks g69.
Han i did chamfer the edges, i mean tumhay gardbard kidher lagrahe hay exactly, mujhay itna tu pata hay kay rear lights kay socket mei thorda kam hay, ya phir tumhara matlab hay kay OVERALL sare edges ko chamfer karo? han tyres waisay kafe black hain, will change that too!

Im from Karachi, and you?

Thanks.

main over all ki baat kar raha tha... specially the splits between the doors.. woh kuch ziyada sharp nahi lag rahey...
i know you might have chamfered, lekin phirse try karo
select the already chamfered edges and chamfer them again...
i think it would make a difference!

Yaar main Panjab se houn.... lekin dubai main settled houn!
khair, keep up the good work... lookin forward to see more from you

12-03-2004, 04:31 AM	#1
Adeel Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	My First Car II Audi A4 II Hi All this is my first attempt at a car. Software 3ds max I've learned a lot from this one, although i think much needs improvment, but i hope the second one is flawless.. Anyhow i've placed this one aside as my finished one. I hope u all like it! Thanks all. __________________ ==== Adeel Last edited by Adeel; 12-03-2004 at 12:05 PM..

12-03-2004, 08:57 AM	#2
Profane Matteo Masciotti Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Italy Posts: 697 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow!is it really the first car u've done? Great job!!! __________________ www.3dtotal.com>free stuff>tutorials>maya...there you'll find my tutorial. CLICK BELOWE http://www.threedy.com/site/forum/sh...threadid=28147

12-03-2004, 12:03 PM	#3
Adeel Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yes this is my first car! Thanks Profane __________________ ==== Adeel

12-03-2004, 10:30 PM	#4
kribz Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: SWEDEN Posts: 166 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well it´s certainly not bad for a first car...not bad at all....infact it´s great __________________ / KRIBZ

13-03-2004, 06:29 PM	#5
g69 [Gwandi] Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: here! WHERE??? Posts: 465 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wah adeel, yaar zabardast kaam hai bhai tera! keep it up! headlights need some tweaks though... simply good for a 1st time __________________ .my photo refered scene .Bedroom Interior WIP: BMW.x5 WIP: GI Scene WIP: Peugeot 206 WRC my online portfolio

13-03-2004, 08:28 PM	#6
geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow.. very cool indeed.... as far as modelling is concerned.....the car's in right propotions..... my only crit is to work more on the shader.....i have a car paint shader in my tutorial in the tutorials forum....i wud luv it if u try it.... moreover.....i think...the shadow is a bit....i cant quite say...i think u can work out for a better final render... for the first car....i say its simply wonderful..... keep up the good work! -Fahad (geoMan) __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

14-03-2004, 01:44 AM	#7
Adeel Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you all Well g69 u r right, the headlights do need a little tweaking, i'll fix those. thanks And Fahad i'll certainly look at your shader tut. Thanks. Take care __________________ ==== Adeel

14-03-2004, 04:08 AM	#8
geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well.... that wud be real nice of ya.....and dont forget to post a render on that thread! __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

14-03-2004, 10:02 PM	#9
cbaristo membrete! Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montevideo, Uruguay Posts: 283 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	first car? jesus!! nice work. one think: is the front logo as big as this? see you around __________________ this is just a lot of pixels!! you only have to know how to arrange them right! .................................................. .... cbaristo.com

16-03-2004, 01:08 PM	#10
Adeel Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks well according to the blueprint that ive used the logo proportions are identical! ive double checked that! __________________ ==== Adeel

20-03-2004, 01:44 AM	#11
Adeel Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	and here is the back view! Audi A4 And this is the rear view of the car. the rear lights do need work, but i've finished this one. i've already started work on my next car, intend to finish that off properly. __________________ ==== Adeel

20-03-2004, 06:09 AM	#14
geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well.... there seems to be a lot at the bottom of the doors.....some black area.....it looks like crashed from there! __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

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