W.I.P: Female head

Downup · 15-03-2004, 07:39 AM

I think this is my 590 post on a female

But here it is a new one.. Smooth version soon will ust fix the eye sockets and ear attach and a boring line in the middle of the head

:mad:

MrArmless · 15-03-2004, 07:53 AM

Hello IdownupI! I feel your face's topology is pretty good, side view looks ok. The area right in front of the ear looks a bit bloated, and to the left of the nose (still in side view) the mesh seems to cave in a bit. Front view I'd have to say the head is too round, like a sphere and hence, too large (unless you're going for a stylised version) The edgeloops around the eyes seem incomplete and the one around the mouth shouldend up near/a bit higher than the nostril. The are a couple of Tri's on the forehead and nose that could be worked on too. All in all, I'd say pretty good topology, edgeloops are off tho and you should try to fix them. I hope I'm not too wrong in my crits 'cus i'm learning myself

Have a good day!

keep the updates comming

(to those with better knowledge than me, feel free to crit my crit

)

Downup · 25-03-2004, 11:38 AM

Ahh done alot.. =/

Well here it is.. 2800polys without the Eyes and teeth parts. else 4500 =)

What can i say more.. Check the wireframe.. Why is it a black vertex from the nose to the hand there?... I cant remove it..

Scop-Man · 26-03-2004, 06:21 AM

i like it, but are you doing 'low' poly in pourpous??

(i say 'low' becouse myne has about 10000 polys in the head only, what can i say i like it smooth

)

any way, grate start

T0XIC · 26-03-2004, 09:24 AM

lookin pretty good, but there's somethin funny goin on behind the ear where the skull meets the back of the neck- a bulge or something - we don't really have a great view of that are atm.

Jojomondag · 28-03-2004, 01:58 PM

Downup its looking really awsome dont give up on this one i whanna see atleast 3 more updates :P

Downup · 28-03-2004, 02:02 PM

Ohh yeah.. I am slowly doing little each time.. If i rush my models does it get boring to work with them...

Soo tomorow will it be update

Borg · 28-03-2004, 03:26 PM

in the 3/4 view the back of the head looks a bit flat...its coming along well though.

Downup · 28-03-2004, 04:38 PM

What i have done today .. The boots.. =/

Still working but it is soo damn late.. 04:26

My REALY first time on cloth modelling.. Never tried it before.. Soo be nice to me =)

Still holding the lowpoly character.. I dont like when it should be MEShsmooth 2.. I like it meshsmooth 0.. So dont ask me to change it

.. And NO i will not resize the boobs :P

about 4300polys .. =/

Downup · 28-03-2004, 04:40 PM

"me fail english, thats unpossible!"

HAHAH Ralph in simpsons

Downup · 28-03-2004, 04:42 PM

HATE THE strange line,Vertex there

Jojomondag · 01-04-2004, 10:57 PM

Looks really nice now Downup. Looks a bit like unreal tournament character. But the shoes you could have more detail in them. But looks cool i like those rope things that´s strapped around her leggs give me tut on how you did those.

niki · 01-04-2004, 11:29 PM

nice work...
1 thing: improve the belly!!

Downup · 02-04-2004, 10:13 AM

will make a little different now

Yes yes.. More more.. I will skip the legs and do only the upper body..

Downup · 02-04-2004, 10:15 AM

niki.. mkay done i think =)

Jojomondag: Hmm the things around the legs ar ust cylinders.. =/

15-03-2004, 07:39 AM	#1
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ashley : Female Warrior I think this is my 590 post on a female But here it is a new one.. Smooth version soon will ust fix the eye sockets and ear attach and a boring line in the middle of the head :mad: __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/ Last edited by Downup; 29-03-2004 at 04:13 AM..

15-03-2004, 07:53 AM	#2
MrArmless Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montreal, Quebec Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Hello IdownupI! I feel your face's topology is pretty good, side view looks ok. The area right in front of the ear looks a bit bloated, and to the left of the nose (still in side view) the mesh seems to cave in a bit. Front view I'd have to say the head is too round, like a sphere and hence, too large (unless you're going for a stylised version) The edgeloops around the eyes seem incomplete and the one around the mouth shouldend up near/a bit higher than the nostril. The are a couple of Tri's on the forehead and nose that could be worked on too. All in all, I'd say pretty good topology, edgeloops are off tho and you should try to fix them. I hope I'm not too wrong in my crits 'cus i'm learning myself Have a good day! keep the updates comming (to those with better knowledge than me, feel free to crit my crit ) __________________ My WIP thread (my small office room): http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=56250 Last edited by MrArmless; 15-03-2004 at 07:55 AM..

25-03-2004, 11:38 AM	#3
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ahh done alot.. =/ Well here it is.. 2800polys without the Eyes and teeth parts. else 4500 =) What can i say more.. Check the wireframe.. Why is it a black vertex from the nose to the hand there?... I cant remove it.. __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

26-03-2004, 09:24 AM	#5
T0XIC Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: NJ USA Posts: 224 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	lookin pretty good, but there's somethin funny goin on behind the ear where the skull meets the back of the neck- a bulge or something - we don't really have a great view of that are atm. __________________ Steps down from soap box

28-03-2004, 01:58 PM	#6
Jojomondag Have too go on never stop Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: sweden Posts: 761 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice ! Downup its looking really awsome dont give up on this one i whanna see atleast 3 more updates :P __________________ Greetings from Josef Nobach www.jojomondag.se

26-03-2004, 06:21 AM	#4
Scop-Man Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: ISRAEL Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like it, but are you doing 'low' poly in pourpous?? (i say 'low' becouse myne has about 10000 polys in the head only, what can i say i like it smooth ) any way, grate start

28-03-2004, 02:02 PM	#7
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ohh yeah.. I am slowly doing little each time.. If i rush my models does it get boring to work with them... Soo tomorow will it be update __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

28-03-2004, 03:26 PM	#8
Borg orc Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Victoria, Australia Posts: 385 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	in the 3/4 view the back of the head looks a bit flat...its coming along well though.

28-03-2004, 04:38 PM	#9
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	What i have done today .. The boots.. =/ Still working but it is soo damn late.. 04:26 My REALY first time on cloth modelling.. Never tried it before.. Soo be nice to me =) Still holding the lowpoly character.. I dont like when it should be MEShsmooth 2.. I like it meshsmooth 0.. So dont ask me to change it .. And NO i will not resize the boobs :P about 4300polys .. =/ __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

28-03-2004, 04:40 PM	#10
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	"me fail english, thats unpossible!" HAHAH Ralph in simpsons __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

28-03-2004, 04:42 PM	#11
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	HATE THE strange line,Vertex there __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

01-04-2004, 10:57 PM	#12
Jojomondag Have too go on never stop Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: sweden Posts: 761 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks really nice now Downup. Looks a bit like unreal tournament character. But the shoes you could have more detail in them. But looks cool i like those rope things that´s strapped around her leggs give me tut on how you did those. __________________ Greetings from Josef Nobach www.jojomondag.se

01-04-2004, 11:29 PM	#13
niki Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Bari - ITALY Posts: 1,191 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice work... 1 thing: improve the belly!! __________________ www.pikoandniki.com 3D GRAPHIC High and Low poly Modeling Lighting and Rendering Animations

02-04-2004, 10:13 AM	#14
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	will make a little different now Yes yes.. More more.. I will skip the legs and do only the upper body.. __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

02-04-2004, 10:15 AM	#15
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	niki.. mkay done i think =) Jojomondag: Hmm the things around the legs ar ust cylinders.. =/ __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

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