Female Character

YaKuZa_BOSS · 15-03-2004, 07:57 AM

Hi first post here. I think this model is gonna be more organic than inorganic, so, i posted it here.

next update: body's start+ some more details on neck and a ear.
Any C&C's would be great
(no shaderz yet, just modeling)
max 4.0 default scanline
**UPDATED VERSION**
new neck:

the organic part of the body, rest gonna be inorganic:

and the wire:

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_wirea.jpg

MrArmless · 15-03-2004, 08:01 AM

nice model, can't find much to crit on at the moment

Da3X · 15-03-2004, 08:38 AM

Looks good so far! I like the models idea!

I think the eyes are a bit to small for the face... especially compared to the luscious lips! And you should fix the eyeballs position - there is a small gap in one view.

Keep going... will be an interesting thread!

rubberduck · 15-03-2004, 08:46 AM

Looks great sofar, just need to fix the gaps in the corner of the eyes

Downup · 15-03-2004, 12:20 PM

Nice!!

Can u show a low poly wire on it?

Phynius Gauge · 15-03-2004, 03:24 PM

I like this model a lot. I agree with Da3x about the eyes. Otherwise its great

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Dragonkiss · 16-03-2004, 06:25 AM

Hi there,

just wanted to say that very nice, i like her mouth, can you post the wireframe, and what kind of modelling did you use? spline?
anyway good work, want to see more..bye

Downup · 16-03-2004, 08:27 AM

the lips are very good indeed.. Want low poly on them so i learn =)

hpslashluvr · 16-03-2004, 02:08 PM

Angelina Jolie as a mech warrior. Haven't seen that one yet.

jk

Nice job, no crits beyond what everyone else has said.

YaKuZa_BOSS · 17-03-2004, 04:16 PM

thanks the feedback. update

Phynius Gauge · 17-03-2004, 05:53 PM

Excellent stuff. The body is really nice. I think the forehead may be a little flat though. Otherwise no crits.

Da3X · 17-03-2004, 07:38 PM

The body is PERFECT! You've done a very good job on the body... perfect proportions - if you ask me! Awesome work!

I'd like it even more if you would append updates to the end. This gives everybody new to this thread the opportunity to see how the model evolved in the past and it makes it easier for us to see the improvements.

IanSpendloff · 17-03-2004, 08:54 PM

The body is great! Makes you wanna pinch it. (or is that just me?)

Downup · 18-03-2004, 09:04 AM

DDDDdamn u changed images.. Wow this is soo damn good!

Phynius Gauge · 18-03-2004, 10:14 AM

Could you post the wireframe of the body?

15-03-2004, 07:57 AM	#1
YaKuZa_BOSS Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Brazil Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Female Character Hi first post here. I think this model is gonna be more organic than inorganic, so, i posted it here. next update: body's start+ some more details on neck and a ear. Any C&C's would be great (no shaderz yet, just modeling) max 4.0 default scanline UPDATED VERSION new neck: the organic part of the body, rest gonna be inorganic: and the wire: http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_wirea.jpg Last edited by YaKuZa_BOSS; 17-03-2004 at 04:12 PM..

15-03-2004, 08:01 AM	#2
MrArmless Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montreal, Quebec Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	nice model, can't find much to crit on at the moment __________________ My WIP thread (my small office room): http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=56250

15-03-2004, 08:38 AM	#3
Da3X Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Berlin, Germany Posts: 190 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks good so far! I like the models idea! I think the eyes are a bit to small for the face... especially compared to the luscious lips! And you should fix the eyeballs position - there is a small gap in one view. Keep going... will be an interesting thread! __________________ Current Work in Progress... @ http://www.Da3X.de/ Showing off some images and videos of the creative things currently in the works...

15-03-2004, 08:46 AM	#4
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks great sofar, just need to fix the gaps in the corner of the eyes __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

15-03-2004, 12:20 PM	#5
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice!! Can u show a low poly wire on it? __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

15-03-2004, 03:24 PM	#6
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like this model a lot. I agree with Da3x about the eyes. Otherwise its great .

16-03-2004, 06:25 AM	#7
Dragonkiss Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 263 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi there, just wanted to say that very nice, i like her mouth, can you post the wireframe, and what kind of modelling did you use? spline? anyway good work, want to see more..bye

16-03-2004, 08:27 AM	#8
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the lips are very good indeed.. Want low poly on them so i learn =) __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

16-03-2004, 02:08 PM	#9
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Angelina Jolie as a mech warrior. Haven't seen that one yet. jk Nice job, no crits beyond what everyone else has said. __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

17-03-2004, 04:16 PM	#10
YaKuZa_BOSS Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Brazil Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks the feedback. update

17-03-2004, 05:53 PM	#11
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Excellent stuff. The body is really nice. I think the forehead may be a little flat though. Otherwise no crits.

17-03-2004, 07:38 PM	#12
Da3X Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Berlin, Germany Posts: 190 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The body is PERFECT! You've done a very good job on the body... perfect proportions - if you ask me! Awesome work! I'd like it even more if you would append updates to the end. This gives everybody new to this thread the opportunity to see how the model evolved in the past and it makes it easier for us to see the improvements. __________________ Current Work in Progress... @ http://www.Da3X.de/ Showing off some images and videos of the creative things currently in the works...

17-03-2004, 08:54 PM	#13
IanSpendloff Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: London Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The body is great! Makes you wanna pinch it. (or is that just me?) __________________ http://www.spendloff.dsl.pipex.com

18-03-2004, 09:04 AM	#14
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	DDDDdamn u changed images.. Wow this is soo damn good! __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

18-03-2004, 10:14 AM	#15
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Could you post the wireframe of the body?

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