Mystery Woman

punk_kid916 · 16-03-2004, 07:55 PM

This is the start on the single femail character that is in the short I am working on. She has been offically dubbed the Mystery Woman. Mainly because she plays a pivitol part in the short but we never truely know anything about here. Hard to explain, but it makes sense I promise!! The first image is a shot of the head, no textures as of yet on it. The second is her body with her dress on. The dress is fully dynamic (using sim cloth) and working quite nicely in the dynamics tests that I have done so far. Textures need work and are not finished there either. Crits wanted!!

punk_kid916 · 16-03-2004, 07:56 PM

And the second image...

RodrigoRosa · 16-03-2004, 09:10 PM

nice dude, tho the ears seems a little flat...

keep it up

Cracadoo · 16-03-2004, 11:03 PM

you should also do somepthing with the nose (it looks like it belong to a man). but the head looks preety realistic this way-i dont know what you effect you want. only thing i can see about body that i dont like is the neck-it's preety wide from that view. Still it is just my opinion...

Downup · 17-03-2004, 07:14 AM

not soo big nose

Corth · 18-03-2004, 07:33 AM

It looks to me like the model is a little too square to be female. The area around the eyes especially. (That, and the nose... but it's been said)

rubberduck · 18-03-2004, 09:13 AM

Looks good

but like others have said, you need to tweak the face some more and the dress looks weird in places, too me it looks like very thick fabric, like at the bottom, maybe too thick

punk_kid916 · 23-03-2004, 07:51 PM

Thanks for the comments. I have been working on several thing with her and some other stuff as well.

rubberduck: I noticed those problems on the dress as well. I am pretty sure that the problems in the folds are due to the fairly low res mesh that I was running for the cloth sim (it was just a test at that point). I am going to run it again with the high res mesh and see if that helps

I have a new shot of the Mystery Woman to show here. I got the textures done and some hair on her. The hair still needs a bit of work, but this gets the point across for now. Let me know what you think!!

punk_kid916 · 23-03-2004, 07:51 PM

Helps if you attach the picture

16-03-2004, 07:55 PM	#1
punk_kid916 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Mystery Woman This is the start on the single femail character that is in the short I am working on. She has been offically dubbed the Mystery Woman. Mainly because she plays a pivitol part in the short but we never truely know anything about here. Hard to explain, but it makes sense I promise!! The first image is a shot of the head, no textures as of yet on it. The second is her body with her dress on. The dress is fully dynamic (using sim cloth) and working quite nicely in the dynamics tests that I have done so far. Textures need work and are not finished there either. Crits wanted!!

16-03-2004, 09:10 PM	#3
RodrigoRosa WHAT?!?! Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Brasilia, Brazil Posts: 711 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice dude, tho the ears seems a little flat... keep it up __________________ "if the education is expensive, experience the ignorance." "Everything that has a beginning has an end" - The Matrix Revolutions

16-03-2004, 11:03 PM	#4
Cracadoo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Belgrade, Serbia Posts: 436 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	you should also do somepthing with the nose (it looks like it belong to a man). but the head looks preety realistic this way-i dont know what you effect you want. only thing i can see about body that i dont like is the neck-it's preety wide from that view. Still it is just my opinion... __________________ My Dominance War Entry

17-03-2004, 07:14 AM	#5
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	not soo big nose __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

18-03-2004, 07:33 AM	#6
Corth Post Count +1! Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Alberta, Canada Posts: 454 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	It looks to me like the model is a little too square to be female. The area around the eyes especially. (That, and the nose... but it's been said) __________________ I'm going to live forever, or die trying. Web

16-03-2004, 07:56 PM	#2
punk_kid916 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	And the second image...

18-03-2004, 09:13 AM	#7
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks good but like others have said, you need to tweak the face some more and the dress looks weird in places, too me it looks like very thick fabric, like at the bottom, maybe too thick __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

23-03-2004, 07:51 PM	#8
punk_kid916 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the comments. I have been working on several thing with her and some other stuff as well. rubberduck: I noticed those problems on the dress as well. I am pretty sure that the problems in the folds are due to the fairly low res mesh that I was running for the cloth sim (it was just a test at that point). I am going to run it again with the high res mesh and see if that helps I have a new shot of the Mystery Woman to show here. I got the textures done and some hair on her. The hair still needs a bit of work, but this gets the point across for now. Let me know what you think!!

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