Character: Female (MS) (Nude)

sadaphule · 16-03-2004, 11:32 PM

Hi
this is my first model here, modeling in Max, Texture in Deep Paint

c & c are well come

Prashant Sadaphule

Cyrenn · 16-03-2004, 11:43 PM

Hmmmm.

Not much to say, beside that you rock.

Great job. Good textures and all

was wondering how you did the hair.

Any tips on which way you prefer to model. I'm always looking for help.

heres my WIP.
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...threadid=16717

Cyrenn

camalot · 17-03-2004, 07:17 AM

Can i have her number?

hehe great work

Emperor · 17-03-2004, 08:28 AM

Hey there and welcome. Great great modeling, texturing and lightning u have there. Really top notch, as far as her body goes. But something about the face bugs me. It seems unnatural somehow. And it doesn't hold the same great standard as teh rest of her.I can't really pinoint it but somethig is just, odd.

MonteCristo · 17-03-2004, 08:33 AM

Well this is five stars. The body is superb, but I'm not happy with the face. I think perhaps the lips are too big, they look fake, and don't compliment her natural-looking body. Also, she lacks life at the moment, I think it's her eyes, there is no mystery or personality in her expression. It's really only tweaks that I can see. Otherwise, this is an excellent piece.

neiy0 · 17-03-2004, 04:06 PM

yeah something looks wrong with the eyes and the lips..they both look to pronounced and bulgey...but apart from that 5*'s def.!

neiy0 · 17-03-2004, 04:07 PM

i know what it is..her forehead is way too big..and boney..like its been pushed out..

::-Unplugged-:: · 19-03-2004, 09:32 PM

the model is fantastic.
but the bump of the face is a little rough.
Take it easy,the texture wants more color!

nico3d · 29-03-2004, 04:16 PM

mmmm I think the hands are still a bit plastic like....

the face looks good, there's something on it, I still can't decide what's wrong...

but it looks fantastic, the pose, the texturing, the lighting....

arnelar · 29-03-2004, 11:30 PM

Nice model of a woman, just the texturing needs more tweaking. Can you load a wireframe? TY.

Aichi-Val · 30-03-2004, 10:46 AM

very nice model, the bump map looks pretty good except for the face, and the shadowing on her face looks a bit off

kalpesh · 31-03-2004, 08:35 PM

wow ,,, great job.. only the thing is ..at my point of view some liveness is missing becouse of plean bg... other then great work...

sarN · 01-04-2004, 03:01 PM

I agree with monte, there doesnt seem to be much life in her eyes, and her lips i think are overdone with the lipstick. She looks like shes in a sad stage of her life

16-03-2004, 11:32 PM	#1
sadaphule Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: India Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Character: Female (MS) (Nude) Hi this is my first model here, modeling in Max, Texture in Deep Paint c & c are well come Prashant Sadaphule

16-03-2004, 11:43 PM	#2
Cyrenn Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 1,064 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You rock. Hmmmm. Not much to say, beside that you rock. Great job. Good textures and all was wondering how you did the hair. Any tips on which way you prefer to model. I'm always looking for help. heres my WIP. http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...threadid=16717 Cyrenn

17-03-2004, 07:17 AM	#3
camalot Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: UK Middlands Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Can i have her number? hehe great work __________________ Beginner

17-03-2004, 08:28 AM	#4
Emperor Cookiefreak Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Lund, Sweden Posts: 666 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey there and welcome. Great great modeling, texturing and lightning u have there. Really top notch, as far as her body goes. But something about the face bugs me. It seems unnatural somehow. And it doesn't hold the same great standard as teh rest of her.I can't really pinoint it but somethig is just, odd. __________________ "Stop looking at me...you cookie freak!

17-03-2004, 04:06 PM	#6
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah something looks wrong with the eyes and the lips..they both look to pronounced and bulgey...but apart from that 5's def.! __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5 collaboration film!

17-03-2004, 08:33 AM	#5
MonteCristo Can't stay away. Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: UK Posts: 2,666 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	Well this is five stars. The body is superb, but I'm not happy with the face. I think perhaps the lips are too big, they look fake, and don't compliment her natural-looking body. Also, she lacks life at the moment, I think it's her eyes, there is no mystery or personality in her expression. It's really only tweaks that I can see. Otherwise, this is an excellent piece.

17-03-2004, 04:07 PM	#7
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i know what it is..her forehead is way too big..and boney..like its been pushed out.. __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

19-03-2004, 09:32 PM	#8
::-Unplugged-:: ©1988-2005 Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Persia Posts: 172 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the model is fantastic. but the bump of the face is a little rough. Take it easy,the texture wants more color! __________________ " God lives in Details" mynew worX: New>Deevil's Night Cognator,the Servant aLi.

29-03-2004, 04:16 PM	#9
nico3d Addicted to 3D Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Buenos Aires - Argentina Posts: 481 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	mmmm I think the hands are still a bit plastic like.... the face looks good, there's something on it, I still can't decide what's wrong... but it looks fantastic, the pose, the texturing, the lighting.... __________________ Nico-Nick ----------------------------------

29-03-2004, 11:30 PM	#10
arnelar Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: cebu, philippines Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice model of a woman, just the texturing needs more tweaking. Can you load a wireframe? TY. __________________ 3D makes me happy.

30-03-2004, 10:46 AM	#11
Aichi-Val Ëó÷ Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Infierno Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	very nice model, the bump map looks pretty good except for the face, and the shadowing on her face looks a bit off __________________ Las intenciones verdaderas no están predispuestas a nuestros miedos

31-03-2004, 08:35 PM	#12
kalpesh Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: india Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow ,,, great job.. only the thing is ..at my point of view some liveness is missing becouse of plean bg... other then great work... __________________ kalpesh patel India

01-04-2004, 03:01 PM	#13
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	I agree with monte, there doesnt seem to be much life in her eyes, and her lips i think are overdone with the lipstick. She looks like shes in a sad stage of her life

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