Female Head

TerianSilva · 18-03-2004, 11:30 PM

Hi,

I am currently working on this female head. I would like to hear you comments to this. Please give me advice how to improve the model. Cuz I am not really satisfied with it. Especially the eyes are looking crappy.

The ear is really badly attached... I have to fix this soon.

Thanks,
Marcus

The images (both about 130 KB):

1. Wireframe

2. Rendering

Downup · 19-03-2004, 12:25 PM

Realy nice.. I have to agree to make a ear attach good on a head is hard! I am selfe doing a female now...

Phynius Gauge · 20-03-2004, 11:15 AM

You did a really good job, but she doesn't look that much like a girl if you ask me. Maybe you should make the mouth less wide. It could also be because of the shininess. And there are a few problems with that ear, try using some reference if you're not already.

TerianSilva · 20-03-2004, 01:00 PM

thanks for your feedback. You are right. The ear isn't that nice. It looks like one ear in the other. There are also some problems with the nosebridge (is this the right word?). I show the new version when ready.

greets,
marcus

18-03-2004, 11:30 PM	#1
TerianSilva Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Bremen - Germany Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Female Head Hi, I am currently working on this female head. I would like to hear you comments to this. Please give me advice how to improve the model. Cuz I am not really satisfied with it. Especially the eyes are looking crappy. The ear is really badly attached... I have to fix this soon. Thanks, Marcus The images (both about 130 KB): 1. Wireframe 2. Rendering

19-03-2004, 12:25 PM	#2
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Realy nice.. I have to agree to make a ear attach good on a head is hard! I am selfe doing a female now... __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

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20-03-2004, 11:15 AM	#3
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You did a really good job, but she doesn't look that much like a girl if you ask me. Maybe you should make the mouth less wide. It could also be because of the shininess. And there are a few problems with that ear, try using some reference if you're not already.

20-03-2004, 01:00 PM	#4
TerianSilva Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Bremen - Germany Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for your feedback. You are right. The ear isn't that nice. It looks like one ear in the other. There are also some problems with the nosebridge (is this the right word?). I show the new version when ready. greets, marcus

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