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Old 19-03-2004, 08:32 PM   #1
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Hi all, I want to post my friend's work here, he want to know some crits and feedback from this forum . made with max 6.
how is it?
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Old 19-03-2004, 08:34 PM   #2
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Old 19-03-2004, 08:37 PM   #3
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nice model...i wud suggest u to give different colour to different parts with multi-sub-object......i cant much distinguish the parts...

nice model....i can feel it!
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Looks too rounded. I think the edges need to be sharper around the arms and legs.
Otherwise, so far so good
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geoMan: Thanks for your kind comment and suggestion.

benip : Thanks for your crits, I'll see if my friend want to rework it or not, Thanks .
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