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Old 22-03-2004, 10:16 AM   #1
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Wink Character Linda

This is my latest project that I've been doing during weekends . It is great to model something for myself . So I decided to model a high poly chick , with no poly limitations , just to see how far can I push my modeling skills . I will try to update this post every week just to see my WIP . I am also planing to texture her and probably ridge for a still . Coments and critiques are welcome .


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Old 22-03-2004, 10:48 AM   #2
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WOW!

Looks great. No crits.


How many iterations are you using. If your using max.

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My WIP

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Old 22-03-2004, 11:12 AM   #3
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for me.her ass is too big for me. but if you like it that cool
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Old 22-03-2004, 12:13 PM   #4
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for me.her ass is too big for me. but if you like it that cool
i don't think it's big but... imo it is very squared
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Old 22-03-2004, 03:18 PM   #5
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Not bad, her breasts look really saggy, and it looks like she's wearing a diaper full of crap in it, fix those up and its super.
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Old 22-03-2004, 04:55 PM   #6
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arse is kinda wrong.
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Old 23-03-2004, 05:03 AM   #7
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It looks like something is squishing her @$$ cheeks together and pushing them out. very unnatural looking.
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Old 23-03-2004, 09:56 AM   #8
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Yeah, her booty is way wrong, looks like she had an accident. Lotsa chunk in that trunk. Just playin, a few tweaks and itll be as goog as gold... you have the volume right in my opinion, just the shape is grotesque
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Old 23-03-2004, 10:29 AM   #9
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Thanx alot guys for the replays . I will try to fix her ass as soon as I have time . She will also get a guns and some more stuff to make her look more detailed . I will also work some more on her shirt right now it is just a generic shape . Your coments will really help me to improve my model .
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Old 23-03-2004, 10:56 AM   #10
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Sorry dude, she looks young, and your breats are just so saggy, like you are gonna HAVE to fix that, cause it definatly impacts the overall character, so please make them young and perky (HA HA sound like a perv here) but you get my drift,


VERY cool though, i really love your modeling style, and i wish you the best of luck!
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Old 23-03-2004, 10:57 AM   #11
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Sorry, i notice some otehr things, her thighs and her upper legs are very... weird... like the upper leg is WAY to big man.. shes like skinny... fat kinda... weird... also her hands are WAY to boney, you might want to make the bones less noticable...
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Old 29-03-2004, 07:21 AM   #12
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Well here is another WIP . I made alot of changes . New breast , lower lag and knee , face has been fixed , arm pit area ,her ass , throwing knives , par of braces have been added . I am almost finished with the modeling . I will try to work on guns , when I have time . Coments and critiques are welcome as usual . And here some renders , and close up shots .



-a head with wires .



-close render.
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Old 29-03-2004, 07:48 AM   #13
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imo her backside still weird, not natural...
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Old 29-03-2004, 09:27 AM   #14
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i don't think it's the back exactly...i think the oddness is coming from the upper arm and shoulder being a bit small in diameter, also her shoulder width might be a tiny bit wide. i would also move the breasts up a little and take out the large bumps at each finger/knuckle joint...when the fingers are extended, there are no bumps here even on a bony hand (i am looking at my own bony hand). the clothes look great
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Old 29-03-2004, 12:11 PM   #15
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Lookes like the girl from 5th element



Hehe well almost

Very nice work!!
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