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Old 30-03-2004, 08:58 AM   #1
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Dell Dimension PC

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Long time no post! Lost the house file I was working on somehow Anyway, I decided to start a Dell PC. So far I have spent about an hour on it - there are a few probs I think... C & C Welcome!

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Old 30-03-2004, 09:00 AM   #2
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Old 30-03-2004, 09:23 AM   #3
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Hi again,

I have added a few more details...

I will upload again soon - I don't want to spend too long on this.

Any comments?
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Old 30-03-2004, 10:40 PM   #4
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Hi,

I know its not the most exciting project - but no comments yet?

I will update v. soon...

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Old 30-03-2004, 10:59 PM   #5
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Hi,

Began working on the screen, it needs to be enlarged somewhat... Anyway, here is a picture of it so far....
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Old 30-03-2004, 11:39 PM   #6
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Nice Dell



The pc looks great. Maybe you should put some chrome detail on the tower.

Also dont forget to build your mouse.

Keep up the good work.


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Old 31-03-2004, 12:25 AM   #7
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Thanks for the comments,

I'm going to do the mouse and keyboard soon, but I just thought that you might like to see a quick update. I know the PC isn't true to the original, but I'm experimenting to see if I can make the scene more interesting...
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Old 31-03-2004, 09:48 AM   #8
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hi, lookin nice, but i think u need to put a glow on the screen, its imposible to get a shadow that dark on somthin that actually produces light, also the image on screen is blurred, have u got the texture settin right.
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Old 31-03-2004, 10:28 AM   #9
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Old 31-03-2004, 10:57 AM   #10
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good job u should mod it with some neon lights and stuff
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Im waiting at my new pc for more then 3 months now...by the time I get it it isn't even new anymore

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LOL!

I know... why don't I put an axe through the computer?!

Thanks for the comments guys - yer, I know about the lighting, I was just messing around with the textures to be honest - I am starting them again - same kinda thing - but with a more realistic look.

Any ideas for the desk - apart from the 3 month old mouse and keyboard?!

Hmmm....... I might add some neon lights - nice idea!
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hey. nice model. how'd you get smooth and sharp edges in the same box witout gumming up the edges elsewhere? I never figured out how to do that...

On the crits side, you got a good scene going there, but for God's sake enlarge the monitor! and put a glow on it...

's nice to see more original scene concepts after seeing like 500 Viper projects...
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hey. nice model. how'd you get smooth and sharp edges in the same box witout gumming up the edges elsewhere? I never figured out how to do that...
My guess would be smoothing groups and chamfering
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