First Car

[MattyG]

Yea so this is my first car...I think its pretty good for a first but I know its not the greatest....might do an inside or might just put it in a scene....

[LeSria]

is it supposed to be cut in half like that or did you forget to mirror it

[Aichi-Val]

lol LeSria, ya you should mirror it ir symetrify it, maybe use more smoothing

[MattyG]

I didn't mirror it cuz it gets messed up when I do certain parts so I'm waiting and its already 2 smoothing the doors are supposed to be like that....Other than that is it pretty good for a first since no one seemed to comment on that.

[LeSria]

well, I'm no pro, but some things you could to to make it better are like make the windows fit so you cant see white in between them, some of the parts of the car dont really blend in very well and you can see unecessary seams and overlaps of the planes you used, just some suggestions, other than that its nice, I like it,

are you using any references?

[JHarford]

for a first car , yes it is very good, well done
i suggest you do some car tutorial/s from start to finish . maybe buy rendernode issue 2 with its tut in is great.

good luck hope you stick around

[MattyG]

Updates fixed the obvious seems still working on the exterior before I do the inside made a quick scene and copied it to render hope you guys like it oh and I fixed the seam of the front tire welds so its not weird as it may look in the pic I dunno I forget lol.
Edit....and fixed the headlights by shaping them more and adding the glass cover.

[R2Wrace2win]

lookin real good for first car keep it going. Would look good with some nice shiny paint on it

[MattyG]

Thx for the comments I need that kinda support to finish it...about the shiny paint it actually is but I'm using a dim skylight with lighttracer so no shininess but later on I plan on using mentalray cuz of the glass so expect shinyness to come.

[LeSria]

looks great, I gave up on my viper lol