my first model that doesnt suck (badly)

scuzz-z · 02-04-2004, 10:28 AM

ive made a few models so far trying to figure out max and after three months of moving vertices i have the courage to post something. this is my character ooger. day 1

scuzz-z · 02-04-2004, 10:39 AM

here are my concept sketches still no legs tho

Downup · 02-04-2004, 10:41 AM

he lookes sad =(..

Hehe

Well it is like the concept soo great.. Maybe bigger lips?

JHarford · 02-04-2004, 10:46 AM

cool character - good modeling so far .

keep it up

Stuh505 · 02-04-2004, 10:48 AM

no offense, but to be blunt, that concept art is dreadful. your max skills seem much better than your drawing skills (except for the nose). i recommend using other people's concept art. in your model the eyes are done especially well and i also like the skin texture.

scuzz-z · 02-04-2004, 10:54 AM

and here is day 2
ive added the torso arms and hands

scuzz-z · 02-04-2004, 11:07 AM

yeah i know i cant draw but i can sit in front of my puter for days at a time only to eat and take my kid to school. sleeping is optional. i added legs feet ears and ****** covering. here is end of day 3 (yesterday)

Stuh505 · 02-04-2004, 03:40 PM

looking a lot better, he looks kinda like Shrek

scuzz-z · 03-04-2004, 10:13 AM

i fixed the hands a little but they still dont look right.
any tips?

scuzz-z · 03-04-2004, 10:14 AM

needs help

scuzz-z · 03-04-2004, 10:15 AM

and another

TheOne · 03-04-2004, 10:56 AM

looks very nice, but you should use a lighter background and some lights to make your scene brighter.

it ist too dark but i think it would look better.

02-04-2004, 10:28 AM	#1
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	my first model that doesnt suck (badly) ive made a few models so far trying to figure out max and after three months of moving vertices i have the courage to post something. this is my character ooger. day 1

02-04-2004, 10:41 AM	#3
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	he lookes sad =(.. Hehe Well it is like the concept soo great.. Maybe bigger lips? __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

02-04-2004, 10:46 AM	#4
JHarford Airship Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lytham, England Posts: 2,594 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	cool character - good modeling so far . keep it up __________________ Joseph Harford Character Artist Portfolio & Blog : http://www.josephharford.com Tracker Knife - NextGen asset production series Contact me by Mail

02-04-2004, 10:48 AM	#5
Stuh505 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 256 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	no offense, but to be blunt, that concept art is dreadful. your max skills seem much better than your drawing skills (except for the nose). i recommend using other people's concept art. in your model the eyes are done especially well and i also like the skin texture. __________________ "In a world of compromise, some don't."

02-04-2004, 03:40 PM	#8
Stuh505 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 256 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looking a lot better, he looks kinda like Shrek __________________ "In a world of compromise, some don't."

02-04-2004, 10:39 AM	#2
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	here are my concept sketches still no legs tho

02-04-2004, 10:54 AM	#6
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	and here is day 2 ive added the torso arms and hands

02-04-2004, 11:07 AM	#7
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah i know i cant draw but i can sit in front of my puter for days at a time only to eat and take my kid to school. sleeping is optional. i added legs feet ears and ****** covering. here is end of day 3 (yesterday)

03-04-2004, 10:13 AM	#9
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i fixed the hands a little but they still dont look right. any tips?

03-04-2004, 10:14 AM	#10
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	needs help

03-04-2004, 10:15 AM	#11
scuzz-z Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: vancouver, Canada Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	and another

03-04-2004, 10:56 AM	#12
TheOne Icebear Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 1,031 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks very nice, but you should use a lighter background and some lights to make your scene brighter. it ist too dark but i think it would look better. __________________ - my website -

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