Human

MK3D · 03-04-2004, 02:50 PM

Hallo.
I'm working on the human model.
Comments are welcome.
MK3D

Dedalo · 03-04-2004, 03:57 PM

Nice start, looks realy good. why don't you post some wires?

JHarford · 03-04-2004, 03:57 PM

looks great, looks like my wip chest.
have you a wire? no crits so far.

JHarford · 03-04-2004, 03:58 PM

oo and can yuo post a viewport screenshot grey blinn shader.
also state software

Karikoga · 03-04-2004, 09:22 PM

I think the distance between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip is a little too big, and as a result his ears look small....
Otherwise this is very nice work...

MK3D · 04-04-2004, 04:12 AM

Dedalo and cgstipe : Here is wireframe

Karikago : Yes, distance between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip is big, but it is as a my image model. When I tried change so it doesn't look like well.

[X]treme · 04-04-2004, 08:05 AM

hm the overexaggerated musculature may keep it from seeming believable/realistic

but the model is great!

Dragonkiss · 15-04-2004, 04:29 AM

teah it's really good till there....continu want to see update

are you using texture layers?

ptacnik · 15-04-2004, 07:02 AM

Well done!! geez, very well modeled... can you post a non-smoothed wire?

niki · 15-04-2004, 07:19 AM

wow...great work..

keep up!!

shagadalex · 15-04-2004, 09:15 AM

Great model! Although I'm beginning to wonder whether or not 3d people who aren't ripped and just have normal bodies still exist!

geoMan · 15-04-2004, 09:27 AM

nice!

Phynius Gauge · 15-04-2004, 12:02 PM

Good job. The back of the arm looks strange though, but I am assuming you haven't detailed it yet

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MK3D · 20-04-2004, 10:15 AM

Hi all, thanks for supply...

dragonkiss : Yes, I am using texture layer if you mean body blueprints

ptacnik : here is used wireframe without smoothing

shagadalex : I am sorry, but I don't understand well your posting

Phynius Gauge : Yes, arms haven't been finished yet, it should show the basic surface only

MK3D

Karikoga · 22-04-2004, 10:08 AM

Nice detail and modelling but, its probably just me, but I think your proportions do not seem right.
- The size of the head vs body - the head looks a little too big. To me he has child proportions when he is supposed to be a man.
- The waist seems a little flat - it goes straight down. You may want to giv it more width.
The lower part of the body just looks a little smaller to me....

03-04-2004, 02:50 PM	#1
MK3D Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Prague Posts: 50 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Human Hallo. I'm working on the human model. Comments are welcome. MK3D __________________ http://www.michalkotek.com http://www.allworld.cz

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Dedalo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Argentina Posts: 105 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice start, looks realy good. why don't you post some wires? __________________ www.3dpro.com.ar El primer foro argentino de 3D.

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JHarford Airship Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lytham, England Posts: 2,594 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	looks great, looks like my wip chest. have you a wire? no crits so far. __________________ Joseph Harford Character Artist Portfolio & Blog : http://www.josephharford.com Tracker Knife - NextGen asset production series Contact me by Mail

03-04-2004, 03:58 PM	#4
JHarford Airship Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lytham, England Posts: 2,594 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	oo and can yuo post a viewport screenshot grey blinn shader. also state software __________________ Joseph Harford Character Artist Portfolio & Blog : http://www.josephharford.com Tracker Knife - NextGen asset production series Contact me by Mail

03-04-2004, 09:22 PM	#5
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think the distance between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip is a little too big, and as a result his ears look small.... Otherwise this is very nice work... __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

04-04-2004, 04:12 AM	#6
MK3D Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Prague Posts: 50 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dedalo and cgstipe : Here is wireframe Karikago : Yes, distance between the bottom of the nose and the upper lip is big, but it is as a my image model. When I tried change so it doesn't look like well. __________________ http://www.michalkotek.com http://www.allworld.cz

04-04-2004, 08:05 AM	#7
[X]treme Studio in a Box Designer Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Louisiana, United States Posts: 132 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hm the overexaggerated musculature may keep it from seeming believable/realistic but the model is great! __________________ www.studioinabox.org -The Future of Computer Generated Art

15-04-2004, 04:29 AM	#8
Dragonkiss Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 263 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	teah it's really good till there....continu want to see update are you using texture layers?

15-04-2004, 07:02 AM	#9
ptacnik Crazy Man Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 63 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow man Well done!! geez, very well modeled... can you post a non-smoothed wire? __________________ ptacnik.com

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15-04-2004, 09:15 AM	#11
shagadalex Plavalaguna Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Orange County, CA Posts: 71 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great model! Although I'm beginning to wonder whether or not 3d people who aren't ripped and just have normal bodies still exist!

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geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow... nice! __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

15-04-2004, 12:02 PM	#13
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good job. The back of the arm looks strange though, but I am assuming you haven't detailed it yet .

20-04-2004, 10:15 AM	#14
MK3D Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Prague Posts: 50 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi all, thanks for supply... dragonkiss : Yes, I am using texture layer if you mean body blueprints ptacnik : here is used wireframe without smoothing shagadalex : I am sorry, but I don't understand well your posting Phynius Gauge : Yes, arms haven't been finished yet, it should show the basic surface only MK3D __________________ http://www.michalkotek.com http://www.allworld.cz Last edited by MK3D; 19-07-2004 at 02:36 AM..

22-04-2004, 10:08 AM	#15
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice detail and modelling but, its probably just me, but I think your proportions do not seem right. - The size of the head vs body - the head looks a little too big. To me he has child proportions when he is supposed to be a man. - The waist seems a little flat - it goes straight down. You may want to giv it more width. The lower part of the body just looks a little smaller to me.... __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

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