Character: Demon (cartoon)

mecman · 15-04-2004, 05:02 PM

Hello Guys!
This is my 3rd organic model, done in maya. It´s very incomplete, but I want to share it with you. Hope you like it!

Any C&C would be great guys!
Thanks!!

YaKuZa_BOSS · 15-04-2004, 05:08 PM

very cool concept and character. I'd suggest to work a bit better in his lower body section. he looks a bit weird there.

Keep up bro

geoMan · 15-04-2004, 08:21 PM

nice model...i think the hooves need some work!

chaos_seed · 16-04-2004, 12:25 AM

WOW !!! That's some cool work !!!model looks realy clean and has a lot of personality ! Great work !!!

mecman · 16-04-2004, 04:32 AM

Hi all

Boss, I agree about the lower body section...I will work on it as soon as possible! thanks for you comment!

Geoman, I agree with you too, the hooves needs a lot of work yet......

Chaos_seed, thanks for your nice comment!!!

It makes me very motivated!!!

thanks for the feedback guys!

T0XIC · 16-04-2004, 05:37 AM

I'm definatly digging the belt!

As for the hooves, I recommend putting some cracks in them- sort of like the main split in thw center, but smaller- as if they've been worn by years of stomping about

Also, I'm not sure what your plans for hair are at this point, but if the legs are gonna be hairy, be sure to cover the top of the hooves w/ hair.
Oh one last thing- I think the hooves shouldn't be so smooth- I'd imagine there'd be a pretty sharp edge between the bottom of the hoof and the sides, as well as along the cleave.

mecman · 16-04-2004, 06:07 AM

Hey toxic! I really like your idea to the hooves, the crack thing! Thanks a lot!

and yes, the legs will be hairy!!
Thanks for your comment!

mecman · 17-04-2004, 02:45 AM

Hello guys, a little update.

Thanks!

nendo · 17-04-2004, 03:25 AM

i say work on the chains a bit more. make them thicker. there looking abit to thin

mecman · 17-04-2004, 04:41 AM

Thanks for your comment nendo, I will make a test, but I think that the chains are ok...
Thanks man!

mecman · 17-04-2004, 07:10 PM

another up, start of the buckler and the sword, the blade is only the basic shape! thanks!

mecman · 21-04-2004, 04:01 AM

Here goes another up, some modifications in his face and character...
Thanks friends! hope you like!

rubberduck · 21-04-2004, 11:55 AM

Great looking model, but the arms are too thin, needs more muscles IMO, the section between the knees and the hooves looks wrong too me, the calf/ankle should be longer and straight

mecman · 22-04-2004, 03:08 PM

Hey rubberduck, thanks for your comment!
I fixed these points!

Thanks man!

MainlineX · 22-04-2004, 04:15 PM

Nice concept sketch and nice character! Coming on nicely!!

15-04-2004, 05:02 PM	#1
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Character: Demon (cartoon) Hello Guys! This is my 3rd organic model, done in maya. It´s very incomplete, but I want to share it with you. Hope you like it! Any C&C would be great guys! Thanks!! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

15-04-2004, 08:21 PM	#3
geoMan is studying. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Pakistan Posts: 829 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmm... nice model...i think the hooves need some work! __________________ But in the end, no matter what i pretend, the journey is more important than the end or the start, and what it meant to me will eventually be a memory of the time WHEN I TRIED SO HARD! Mental Ray Rendering And shader Discussion thread

16-04-2004, 04:32 AM	#5
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi all Boss, I agree about the lower body section...I will work on it as soon as possible! thanks for you comment! Geoman, I agree with you too, the hooves needs a lot of work yet...... Chaos_seed, thanks for your nice comment!!! It makes me very motivated!!! thanks for the feedback guys! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

16-04-2004, 05:37 AM	#6
T0XIC Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: NJ USA Posts: 224 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm definatly digging the belt! As for the hooves, I recommend putting some cracks in them- sort of like the main split in thw center, but smaller- as if they've been worn by years of stomping about Also, I'm not sure what your plans for hair are at this point, but if the legs are gonna be hairy, be sure to cover the top of the hooves w/ hair. Oh one last thing- I think the hooves shouldn't be so smooth- I'd imagine there'd be a pretty sharp edge between the bottom of the hoof and the sides, as well as along the cleave. __________________ Steps down from soap box

16-04-2004, 06:07 AM	#7
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey toxic! I really like your idea to the hooves, the crack thing! Thanks a lot! and yes, the legs will be hairy!! Thanks for your comment! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...." Last edited by mecman; 16-04-2004 at 06:09 AM..

15-04-2004, 05:08 PM	#2
YaKuZa_BOSS Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Brazil Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	very cool concept and character. I'd suggest to work a bit better in his lower body section. he looks a bit weird there. Keep up bro

16-04-2004, 12:25 AM	#4
chaos_seed Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: france Posts: 138 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	WOW !!! That's some cool work !!!model looks realy clean and has a lot of personality ! Great work !!!

17-04-2004, 02:45 AM	#8
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hello guys, a little update. Thanks! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

17-04-2004, 03:25 AM	#9
nendo Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i say work on the chains a bit more. make them thicker. there looking abit to thin

17-04-2004, 04:41 AM	#10
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for your comment nendo, I will make a test, but I think that the chains are ok... Thanks man! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

17-04-2004, 07:10 PM	#11
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	another up, start of the buckler and the sword, the blade is only the basic shape! thanks! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...." Last edited by mecman; 18-04-2004 at 01:25 PM..

21-04-2004, 04:01 AM	#12
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Here goes another up, some modifications in his face and character... Thanks friends! hope you like! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

21-04-2004, 11:55 AM	#13
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great looking model, but the arms are too thin, needs more muscles IMO, the section between the knees and the hooves looks wrong too me, the calf/ankle should be longer and straight __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

22-04-2004, 03:08 PM	#14
mecman Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey rubberduck, thanks for your comment! I fixed these points! Thanks man! __________________ "I see dead Pixels...."

22-04-2004, 04:15 PM	#15
MainlineX Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Johannesburg Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice concept sketch and nice character! Coming on nicely!!

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