two stickman exercises

Wolfe · 15-04-2004, 05:30 PM

Hello,

This is my first post on these forums. I have recently completed two stickman animation exercises in class and I would like to see what you all think of them. They are very short.

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cage.mov

and

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/mailroom.mov

Crits are welcome.

il_paulio · 16-04-2004, 03:56 AM

wow that's some nice animation mate great work. Is that second voice NEWMAN from seinfeld?? It sounds like him

Wolfe · 16-04-2004, 04:42 AM

Thanks for the comment.
Yep, the second one is Newman from Sienfeld. The first one is from a movie called "The Elephant Man" which I have never seen.

Bluder · 17-04-2004, 10:05 AM

yeah nice animation there.

Wolfe · 17-04-2004, 05:33 PM

Thanks Bluder, If anyone has more comments or ideas for improvements or whatever I'm all ears.

FutureMan · 17-04-2004, 06:15 PM

The cage animation might be better if you didn't have him look down. Maybe have him swivel his head like he is looking out at the people infront of the cage instead.

Wolfe · 17-04-2004, 07:27 PM

Thanks Futureman, it really helps to get input from people who are seeing these for the first time. I will try your idea and see how it turns out.

Wolfe · 18-04-2004, 10:15 AM

I made some changes to the cage animation.

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cageRevised.mov

I think it is better. Thanks again FutureMan.

15-04-2004, 05:30 PM	#1
Wolfe Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Canada Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	two stickman exercises Hello, This is my first post on these forums. I have recently completed two stickman animation exercises in class and I would like to see what you all think of them. They are very short. http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cage.mov and http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/mailroom.mov Crits are welcome.

16-04-2004, 03:56 AM	#2
il_paulio P.I.M.P. Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Danau Lebih Manis, the Netherlands Posts: 506 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow that's some nice animation mate great work. Is that second voice NEWMAN from seinfeld?? It sounds like him __________________ "A ferrari is a scaled down version of God!"

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Bluder Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: sweden, Trollhättan Posts: 134 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah nice animation there. __________________ mmm.meindbender.com

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FutureMan Feels Good Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The cage animation might be better if you didn't have him look down. Maybe have him swivel his head like he is looking out at the people infront of the cage instead. __________________ Are you a member of the Feelgoods?

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16-04-2004, 04:42 AM	#3
Wolfe Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Canada Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the comment. Yep, the second one is Newman from Sienfeld. The first one is from a movie called "The Elephant Man" which I have never seen.

17-04-2004, 05:33 PM	#5
Wolfe Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Canada Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Bluder, If anyone has more comments or ideas for improvements or whatever I'm all ears.

17-04-2004, 07:27 PM	#7
Wolfe Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Canada Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Futureman, it really helps to get input from people who are seeing these for the first time. I will try your idea and see how it turns out.

18-04-2004, 10:15 AM	#8
Wolfe Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Canada Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I made some changes to the cage animation. http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cageRevised.mov I think it is better. Thanks again FutureMan.

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