African dude

sys0p · 18-04-2004, 07:12 AM

still gotta work on the translucency for the ears. then im giving hims dreadlocks and a beard

Dragonkiss · 18-04-2004, 08:03 AM

hey dude the texture is really amazing i like it a lot, wanna see more....

G-Pjube · 18-04-2004, 08:19 AM

Great textures

neiy0 · 18-04-2004, 08:29 AM

this is really nice man, it looks really nice, did u make the textures ur self? it'll be awsome with dread locks too..

sarN · 18-04-2004, 08:43 AM

very sweet, the back of the head isnt textured yet right? Could we see a front and side view as well? That is an awesome texture on there.

Downup · 18-04-2004, 12:14 PM

Looks good.. Nothing to say realy.. lets us see some wires and more view

JHarford · 18-04-2004, 12:22 PM

mishapen brow
too pointy chin
nose to pointy
textures ripped from 3d.sk photos maybe try painting some of your own? . its a bit over used now that model
seems like you modeled it then softselection mishaped a few bits to make it more unique.

neiy0 · 18-04-2004, 05:39 PM

well then..

sys0p · 19-04-2004, 01:24 AM

hey people!
thanks for your replies.
yeah, the textures are not finished yet

Quote:

mishapen brow
too pointy chin
nose to pointy
textures ripped from 3d.sk photos maybe try painting some of your own? . its a bit over used now that model
seems like you modeled it then softselection mishaped a few bits to make it more unique.

thanks for the crits, but i cant do anything at this stage. of course i used photos, as steven stahlberg pointed out to me, its ok to use photos for textures.
in fact, his actual words "I love photos for this reason, it's just totally impossible to paint the same level of detail and realism"
hmmm, heres more closeups.

thanks people

sys0p · 19-04-2004, 01:25 AM

sys0p · 19-04-2004, 02:37 AM

took some lighting out of the texture

neiy0 · 19-04-2004, 03:33 AM

so did u or didnt u make that model urself?

sys0p · 19-04-2004, 05:28 AM

hey neiy0 yeah i did model it myself.
i usually post over at spiraloid => http://cube.phlatt.net/forums/spiral...hp?TopicID=890

JHarford · 19-04-2004, 05:39 AM

yeh you do.

lips are too hard/.defined . should run smoothly into them
bump is too high , maybe thats the lighting.
yes steven has pointed out that photo that photo textures can be good to mix with your painted. but i think you could be more original with your choice of which ones you use.
you got the topology pretty good - spiraloid does that to you

. the corner of the mouth and the topology around the cheek to chin section could use some work . also the ear could.
spiraloid went completely downhill, it used to be a resourse or an inspiration . when all the work posted there was of fntasitc standar , now its turning into just a #cgtalk or somewhere full of kids and beginers . so its just rubbish to look through . til you see gabe or logan in the title.

neiy0 · 19-04-2004, 06:35 AM

well ur certainly a happy character cgstripe haha

ur modelling looks nice, but i would have to agree with cgstripe on the fact that the lips are to defined from the skin, perhaps you can blur the definition line in photoshop or something, if u want to keep the same textures..

18-04-2004, 07:12 AM	#1
sys0p Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: hout bay, cape town Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	African dude still gotta work on the translucency for the ears. then im giving hims dreadlocks and a beard __________________ last project: http://threedy.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13741 i dont want to die without scars ~tyler durden - fight club everyone wants to know what im on, what am i on? im on my bike busting my ass six hours a day ~lance armstrong Last edited by sys0p; 18-04-2004 at 07:14 AM..

18-04-2004, 08:19 AM	#3
G-Pjube LightWave Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: The Netherlands, Gelderland, Nijmegen Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great textures __________________ Dual-Soft.COM - Nintendo Dual Screen development Centre Latest Update - May 28th

18-04-2004, 08:29 AM	#4
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is really nice man, it looks really nice, did u make the textures ur self? it'll be awsome with dread locks too.. __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

18-04-2004, 12:14 PM	#6
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks good.. Nothing to say realy.. lets us see some wires and more view __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

18-04-2004, 12:22 PM	#7
JHarford Airship Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lytham, England Posts: 2,594 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	mishapen brow too pointy chin nose to pointy textures ripped from 3d.sk photos maybe try painting some of your own? . its a bit over used now that model seems like you modeled it then softselection mishaped a few bits to make it more unique. __________________ Joseph Harford Character Artist Portfolio & Blog : http://www.josephharford.com Tracker Knife - NextGen asset production series Contact me by Mail

18-04-2004, 08:03 AM	#2
Dragonkiss Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 263 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey dude the texture is really amazing i like it a lot, wanna see more....

18-04-2004, 08:43 AM	#5
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	very sweet, the back of the head isnt textured yet right? Could we see a front and side view as well? That is an awesome texture on there.

18-04-2004, 05:39 PM	#8
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well then.. __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

19-04-2004, 01:25 AM	#10
sys0p Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: hout bay, cape town Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	__________________ last project: http://threedy.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13741 i dont want to die without scars ~tyler durden - fight club everyone wants to know what im on, what am i on? im on my bike busting my ass six hours a day ~lance armstrong

19-04-2004, 02:37 AM	#11
sys0p Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: hout bay, cape town Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	took some lighting out of the texture __________________ last project: http://threedy.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13741 i dont want to die without scars ~tyler durden - fight club everyone wants to know what im on, what am i on? im on my bike busting my ass six hours a day ~lance armstrong

19-04-2004, 03:33 AM	#12
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	so did u or didnt u make that model urself? __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

19-04-2004, 05:28 AM	#13
sys0p Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: hout bay, cape town Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey neiy0 yeah i did model it myself. i usually post over at spiraloid => http://cube.phlatt.net/forums/spiral...hp?TopicID=890 __________________ last project: http://threedy.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13741 i dont want to die without scars ~tyler durden - fight club everyone wants to know what im on, what am i on? im on my bike busting my ass six hours a day ~lance armstrong

19-04-2004, 05:39 AM	#14
JHarford Airship Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lytham, England Posts: 2,594 Thanks: 1 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	yeh you do. lips are too hard/.defined . should run smoothly into them bump is too high , maybe thats the lighting. yes steven has pointed out that photo that photo textures can be good to mix with your painted. but i think you could be more original with your choice of which ones you use. you got the topology pretty good - spiraloid does that to you . the corner of the mouth and the topology around the cheek to chin section could use some work . also the ear could. spiraloid went completely downhill, it used to be a resourse or an inspiration . when all the work posted there was of fntasitc standar , now its turning into just a #cgtalk or somewhere full of kids and beginers . so its just rubbish to look through . til you see gabe or logan in the title. __________________ Joseph Harford Character Artist Portfolio & Blog : http://www.josephharford.com Tracker Knife - NextGen asset production series Contact me by Mail

19-04-2004, 06:35 AM	#15
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well ur certainly a happy character cgstripe haha ur modelling looks nice, but i would have to agree with cgstripe on the fact that the lips are to defined from the skin, perhaps you can blur the definition line in photoshop or something, if u want to keep the same textures.. __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

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