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Old 23-05-2004, 07:21 AM   #1
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Old 23-05-2004, 07:42 AM   #2
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Very cool Nice texturing and lighting.

A few crits:
1. Some of the horizontal beams have dark bands running across them vertically. It looks a little weird. (The notched vertical supports look great, by the way.)
2. This may just be the result of JPEG compression, but the bump map on the mortar/bricks seems a little blurry, or stretched.
3. Very minor lighting crit: even with direct sunlight, shadows aren't perfectly hard. Maybe just a tad more softness on those?

Nice work, and good attention to detail (birds nest, water stains, etc).
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Old 23-05-2004, 08:27 AM   #3
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Very nice job. Can u show us a wire?
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Old 23-05-2004, 08:59 AM   #4
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haha cool man, very different camera angle, like that

my only crit would be the sky, one half has like only clouds and the other half is perfectly clear, I know that can happen but it would add credibility if you balanced the clouds
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Old 23-05-2004, 02:26 PM   #5
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Old 24-05-2004, 04:42 PM   #6
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Fantastic! Just like all of your work. Your gallery is most impressive.
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Old 24-05-2004, 05:24 PM   #7
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Excellent work, esp with textures.
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Old 24-05-2004, 07:33 PM   #8
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nice work, svenart.

I don't agree with the whitned mass that forms the walls. Your texture makes it look as if it was composed of bricks, which is, as far as i know, not the case. it's a mixture of clay and straw that was smeered between the wooden beams.

correct me if i'm wrong
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