Girl Head

[JayEdwards]

Hey People

Thought I'd post this latest finished head for you to look at. Crits welcome even though its finished. Enjoy


Jango

[e_reality]

love the hair ... what is that ? polygonal or shag ?

[JayEdwards]

Thanks, Its a poly.

[figo]

nice scene agree with the hair, but dude c'mon that bitch is soooo ****ing ugly...

[3dGator]

The modelling is great. You sould work more on the skin textures, though.

Nice model....the ear could use a little work though....
Figo......Women aren`t bitches mate......get yer head out of the sand!!!!

[JayEdwards]

Hey Figo

I appreciate the comment on the hair, but the rest of you're comment aren't very ****ing constructive are they????
I put the image here for a good reson but it wasn't to be trashed by people like you. If you do it again I'll report you to the moderator

Thanks to the others for your comments, yes I agree the ear does need a bit of a tweek, it was a bit of a grind to do whilst making it. I'll have another look

[figo]

Buonarroti : u think too much about what i said...no1 thinks women are bitches...

Jango : give up she is ugly thats my point and u report that wherever u want

[JayEdwards]

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MMM Ugly Avatar!!

[figo]

show me ya head

[BloodKiller]

looks good but she is ugly!

[RickStefani]

I guess people do not get the point of C&C do they. It is supposed to be helpful. Negative comments can be a great thing to help someone improve if you give reasons. You are artists. I hope you abilities are just slightly greater than your tact and impressive writing skills. If you cannot write then draw it and scan in your ideas.

The modeling is very good but I have a few issues with her. Number one is the ear is very fleshy and thick. We tend to associate beauty with youth. The younger someone is you get more of a rounded face with very little definition in the muscles around the mouth. A women’s face is a very delicate thing to model. My advice would be to soften the features a bit.

As I said before, the modeling is done very well; it just needs a bit more tweaking to get the look you are after.

[JayEdwards]

Hooray Rick, thank god someone with a brain. Hows it going not heard from you for a while over at SM.

Yeah, the ear thing, I posted on Bay Raitts site and its basically what they said too and Peltra at SM did too. Shes not necessarily a young girl, the character itself is a bit of a tough guy so she needed to be a bit rugged , if you can say that on a girl, I didn't want her too prissy, as she's supposed to be a bit 'Clint'

I've already smoothed the cheek lines a bit. The ear is getting a make over as we speak then I'll keep it safe for other stuff til I can improve again.

Thanks for your crit, and not shooting me!!!


see you at SM

Jango

[figo]

nobody is shooting you dude..u got my comment why are you cryin' 'cause i said the girl is ugly, BTW i just wanna see a pic of you let me see how handsome you are...

Originally posted by Jango
Hooray Rick, thank god someone with a brain. Hows it going not heard from you for a while over at SM.

Yeah, the ear thing, I posted on Bay Raitts site and its basically what they said too and Peltra at SM did too. Shes not necessarily a young girl, the character itself is a bit of a tough guy so she needed to be a bit rugged , if you can say that on a girl, I didn't want her too prissy, as she's supposed to be a bit 'Clint'

I've already smoothed the cheek lines a bit. The ear is getting a make over as we speak then I'll keep it safe for other stuff til I can improve again.

Thanks for your crit, and not shooting me!!!


see you at SM

Jango

[RickStefani]

I see what you meen. I have been very busy with school lately. Going full time and working full time is tough. I am glad your animation is coming along. her cloths looked real good.

figo, read the first sticky and then read your post again and I am sure you will see what was wrong with it. If you need the help I can outline the parts for you.