Junk...OH-DAMN

Karikoga · 14-06-2004, 07:50 AM

....This is a junkyard scene I recently worked on and I admit it did not go the way I wanted. The idea was to get to learn textures, lighting and to produce a realistic looking scene.
It looks cartoonish...

14-06-2004, 08:41 AM

Yes it does look cartooney.But that is what makes it look unique and different.Your colors are pretty extreme...but a de-saturation will fix that.

TheOne · 14-06-2004, 08:59 AM

I think you should use some brrownish to grey colors, and you should add some noise, maybe instead of the glow. Looks good tho!

Karikoga · 19-06-2004, 02:43 PM

Update....!!! What do u think?

Karikoga · 14-07-2004, 05:38 AM

Here is another scene I have been working on for the last few weeks...

Karikoga · 14-07-2004, 05:39 AM

Whoops!!....here is the attatcment

Aichi-Val · 14-07-2004, 06:09 AM

heh, their nice, but the first one, the background is obviously a picture, doesnt look 3d in the back

Karikoga · 15-07-2004, 02:13 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Aichi-Val
..... the background is obviously a picture, doesnt look 3d in the back

I am not sure whether to take this as a compliment (it can't be looking that real - is it...??). The background is lacking some depth.
Anyway I reandered a wire (never seen a wired scene b4 - at least not in a forum) with the blur. Looks kinda funky. The scene takes about 5-10 min just to open in Max. I have a dino-comp (Intelosaurus); and I kinda overdid the grass...

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14-06-2004, 07:50 AM	#1
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Junk...OH-DAMN ....This is a junkyard scene I recently worked on and I admit it did not go the way I wanted. The idea was to get to learn textures, lighting and to produce a realistic looking scene. It looks cartoonish... __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

14-06-2004, 08:59 AM	#3
TheOne Icebear Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 1,031 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think you should use some brrownish to grey colors, and you should add some noise, maybe instead of the glow. Looks good tho! __________________ - my website -

19-06-2004, 02:43 PM	#4
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update....!!! What do u think? __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

14-07-2004, 05:38 AM	#5
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Here is another scene I have been working on for the last few weeks... __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

14-07-2004, 05:39 AM	#6
Karikoga Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Kumusha Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whoops!!....here is the attatcment __________________ http://www.nyashav.com GOD IS IN THE DETAIL!

14-06-2004, 08:41 AM	#2
Buonarroti Guest Posts: n/a	Yes it does look cartooney.But that is what makes it look unique and different.Your colors are pretty extreme...but a de-saturation will fix that.

14-07-2004, 06:09 AM	#7
Aichi-Val Ëó÷ Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Infierno Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	heh, their nice, but the first one, the background is obviously a picture, doesnt look 3d in the back __________________ Las intenciones verdaderas no están predispuestas a nuestros miedos

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