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Old 20-06-2004, 05:28 PM   #1
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Mercedes DTM

Hi!!

Here the second car I've made in 3ds Max
i know he is not great as many other on this gallery.
I'm a beginner and it's only 5 months i work with
3ds Max and I have a lot to learn!

Special thank to my friend Frank !!




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Old 20-06-2004, 11:19 PM   #2
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Welcome to threedy, duber3! For someone with only 5 months experience with 3ds max, you can sure model really well! The glass could be a little more reflective, though.
Keep it up!
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Old 21-06-2004, 10:32 AM   #3
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yes, the car look good, but technically, you can improve it, please, show us a wire , you don't modelled the frame following the car part (like part upper the front and rear wheel), the carbon fiber is very smooth for angle, and here, you can't succes the reflection between differents parts because of the sharp of the deformation


but it's good anyway, not my favorite deco but good
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Old 03-07-2004, 07:30 PM   #4
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Mercedes DTM West style

Here another picture of the mercedes, I've tried to make the same as the Mike Hakkinen , hope you will like it
also i've tried to make the interrior but i'm not good enough!!!

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Nice car. i like it a lot.

since i am a beginner too can you tell me if you used any tutorials when making that car or if you know any good tutorial for making cars.


Sorry about my english i know it's kinda confusing
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Old 04-07-2004, 12:55 AM   #6
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ooh, your latest render looks much attractive. Love the colour scheme!!!
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Old 04-07-2004, 01:21 AM   #7
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I'm also new and I'm not as good as you, but I think there is something funny about the front grill. other than that it's very nice
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good

It's vry good ..
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nice :)

For someone with only a few months learning Max, that's a very nice car. My first car took me ages and looked no where near that good. Keep it up!
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yeah i agree with cyrrix, the front grill does look kinda funny.. the metal strips looks way to thin for a grill, like there should be thicker metal between..

I don't know if this is a model, or if it is like that in a certain reference pick, but it looks to small, and dainty..so it would break to easily..IMO
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Nice car. i like it a lot.

since i am a beginner too can you tell me if you used any tutorials when making that car or if you know any good tutorial for making cars.


Sorry about my english i know it's kinda confusing
Try this one, it worked very well for me:
http://3dtotal.com/team/Tutorials/fiat500/fiat500.asp
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