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Old 08-07-2004, 08:55 AM   #1
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Realistic female attempt

hi, workin' on a female model, body is in progress, face need a bit tweakin' here and there, any coments would be great.

Hope u like it

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Old 08-07-2004, 08:58 AM   #2
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Nice... I really like the details on the face. Her nipples are a bit too squarish
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Old 08-07-2004, 09:40 AM   #3
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Broken link...
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Old 08-07-2004, 09:44 AM   #4
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Talking Woooo

Cool .....

I canīt wait to see the finish model....
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Old 08-07-2004, 09:49 AM   #5
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Wow, you fixed that broken link pretty quick. Anyways after staring at your model for a couple minutes, I found nothing wrong with it. Good edgeloops, good anatomy, and nice breasts .
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Old 08-07-2004, 10:16 AM   #6
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ya no crits at all
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Old 08-07-2004, 04:15 PM   #7
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Good Hussle.

Ya this model looks really good. Keep it up.
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Old 08-07-2004, 04:44 PM   #8
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Realistic female attempt

This is a great model, and for a first attempt it amazing cant wait to see the end product
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Old 08-07-2004, 05:01 PM   #9
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First of i want to say that is one of the best human heads i have seen here. If you are trying to pass it for the real thing there is a couple of things that tells it's digital in my opinion. The most obvious being the ear - there are to many sharplines at the bends. The same goes for the lines that forms where the eyebrowns would be, it looks great but that kind of facial feature looks to defined for a real person. The line under the lower lip also looks to sharp.

Other then that the only thing I can think of is something that is present in just about all digital works - it is the fact that the head is mirrored so each side is a 100% perfect copy of the other. Real life people have subtle flaws or differences in the symetri of the face. When looking at a perfect head it gives a syntetic impression.
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Old 09-07-2004, 03:04 AM   #10
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thanks bro's, update coming soon.

Tjakalen: thanks the observations, I'll smoth 'em out heh


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Amazing

I just can say....................WOW I'll have married again
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Old 03-08-2004, 03:43 PM   #12
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Hey, greate model. Is one of the best i have seen on this forum. Are you planing to update soon? Would realy like to see more.
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Old 03-08-2004, 03:48 PM   #13
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realy realy nice..

I think the eyes could be a little bit larger but thats it.
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Old 03-08-2004, 04:37 PM   #14
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I have to agree with the others dude, that is an exceptionally good start man. Looking forward to seeing this one come along, but to start with, here's 5* from me.
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i agree with the above mentioned crits. exellent job so farr
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