The Penis Song! (Of Monty Python Fame)

[PCollier]

Hey everyone,

I've just finished an animation. Tell me what you think. Its a character of mine named Burt who sings Eric Idle's Monty Python song 'Penis Song'

You can download it here:
http://www.petecollier.com/Portfolio.../PenisSong.mov - Large Version 8.4mb
http://www.petecollier.com/Portfolio...Song_Small.mov - Small Version 4.02mb

All the best,

Pete
www.petecollier.com

[martimus]

hey

its really nice

one crit, i think he moves his eyes around to much, as if hes looking at a fly or something. seems weird?

cool though

[NordicDemon]

It's so funny. I think i have watched it 5 times now!

[NordicDemon]

It's so funny. I think i have watched it 5 times now!

[martimus]

yes yes

[blao!]

looool i love it!

only crit like martimus already mentioned that he moves his eyes a bit to much.

[Bluder]

i think the walccyckle in the beginning is abit stiff. u should exaggerate every motion more. it feels like a stick.
and u should allways have atleast 2 frames when the leg is completly straight or ells it feels like the legs are bent all the time.
the jump up on the chair feels strange.
i think he should bend he's knees more to gian more power to take that jump and he's left leg should be the last leg to take off from the ground because its the one who pushes the body up in the air. the arm should be more closer to the body to be able to keep the balans.
the lipsynk is nice just some "O" words that feels abit of.
and like the other has said be4 maybe u should tone down the eyes just abit.
not to much though. just some of the movments feels uneeded, i assume the thought is that its a big audience and he looks around at them.
do what u whant whit my crit, its just my opinion.
nice work how ever.