The Jump

MariusvZyl · 31-08-2004, 11:20 AM

Hi everybody.

I'd like to share with you my first character animation.

It's supposed to be a matrixy building jump with elements of Morpheus's "glide" and Agent Smith's landing.

Please tell me what I can improve.

Thanks.
http://www.bgd.sitehostings.com/images/test1.avi

3Dan · 31-08-2004, 03:09 PM

I wish i could do such tricks, but i think i'll wait for the next reincarnation

Maybe you could put something in the background so we could see him moving against it, or since the camera seems to be linked to his belly(?) move the camera more like another human, just catching the jump and backing a bit in awe.
Just a suggestion though.

ZAKU · 15-09-2004, 01:15 PM

I think that for a first animation this is really good.
The secondary anim of the hand reaching for the gun is well done.
Nice job!

31-08-2004, 11:20 AM	#1
MariusvZyl Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: D'Afrique Du Sud Posts: 310 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Jump Hi everybody. I'd like to share with you my first character animation. It's supposed to be a matrixy building jump with elements of Morpheus's "glide" and Agent Smith's landing. Please tell me what I can improve. Thanks. http://www.bgd.sitehostings.com/images/test1.avi __________________ Eagles may SOAR, but weasels dont get sucked into JET ENGINES

31-08-2004, 03:09 PM	#2
3Dan Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I wish i could do such tricks, but i think i'll wait for the next reincarnation Maybe you could put something in the background so we could see him moving against it, or since the camera seems to be linked to his belly(?) move the camera more like another human, just catching the jump and backing a bit in awe. Just a suggestion though. __________________ \| My cars\| \| My radios\|

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15-09-2004, 01:15 PM	#3
ZAKU Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: SOUTH AFRICA Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think that for a first animation this is really good. The secondary anim of the hand reaching for the gun is well done. Nice job!

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